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for Hilltop Cottage

by neelix

schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, two great chapters, was hoping you'd update soon. Poor, poor, Severus looks like he has got the wrong end of the stick, cue angst but hopefully not for too long, please.
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arrh, a cliffhanger! Will Severus go haring off in search of her? Poor Snape.
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! She couldn't send him a note or leave one for him??? She knows he jumps to conclusions...
person KellyJCR
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your evil to just leave it there like that. I was starved for an update and believe me you delivered. That being said I'm dying for more. I can't seem to get enough of your story. I am already feeling distressed at the thought of Severus doing something stupid due to the fact that he thinks so little of himself. Thank you for updating for us on this site I was wondering were you had run off to . Can't wait for more and as usual well done!!!!
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww poor Snape, I hope he doesn't think Hermione has run away from him...but I suspect that he does and he is about to get mightily angry...ooo I can't want to see what happens...also by Snape saying that he has never done the relationship thing before does that mean that he is a virgin, and for that matter is Hermione one too? I don't remember if it was mentioned anywhere in the story earlier...
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arggg! I hope he's not thinking Hermione left him! That infuriating, jump-to-conclusions man!
Ahmmm... Rant aside, this is quickly becoming one of your best stories. You're taking the time to flesh out the story and the relationship (not that I don't love them hopping into bed together, because I really, REALLY do) I just feel more emotionally connected to this story... does that make sense? And the anticipation for the moment when the finally do get together is all the more sweeter. Can't wait for more...
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am becoming very quickly a Severus/Hermione fan.. and for starters this is a very good one so .... we need more ...
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, can't wait for more.
person KellyJCR
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much for telling her that he wasn't interested. Although Hermione has a way of getting through his defenses and oddly enough he knows that. I am so curious as to how he is going to explain this little scenario to himself. It will probably muck things up but if it didn't it wouldn't be Severus now would it. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.