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by neelix

person KellyJCR
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for responding so quickly and with an update as well. I also re-read the chapter and I can see all your points . I was not expecting her to hex Harry or take his opinion into consideration. That would be unlike her she is tired of all the fighting as you said. I just thought she would have had a bit more to say to him in regards to her feelings for Severus and her unability to move on so quickly like the others did. I am already puzzled at Sevs reaction to Hermiones request and I think it may cause Hermione to give more thought to one of Harrys points. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's so nice to see that they are in a happy, stable relationship.

Now Severus just has to be brave and come out of his shell - it might not be as horrible as he thinks. I really hope he will surprise her and show up at the event.

Great chapter!
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh,I wondered how the story was going to progress. I'm glad Harry is finally coming to terms. Such a difficult time for Severus.
person KellyJCR
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the quote "the urge to fuck her with abandon." . I really didn't expect that to come from you but I loved it. It really suited Severus and the need he would be feeling at that point. I was a bit disappointed with the confrontation with Harry. I thought that you were holding Hermione back a bit. I think there wre many things she would have liked to say but didn't and I'm not sure why. Otherwise I am completely enjoying the story and as usual it is written beautifully. Well done!!!!
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated. I'm enjoying the story.
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, they've made the paper! And what will Minerva do?
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I am really glad you updated. Thank you. Their first time was lovely, sweet, realistic, and loving. Utterly perfect. I am sorry Harry was such a prat, but I am glad neither of them are backing up or backing out. I look forward to much more soon. Thank you!! HG4eva
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Tenar10r
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another chapter. :)
person katiekrm
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry isn't being a very good friend...again. I hope Hermione gives him a piece of her mind about his friend skills. I absolutely loved the love scene. It was realistic and sweet. Because more than size, the motion of the ocean, or endurance is how much love is in the act and there was lots of love. I bet Minerva will surprise Severus, but that last line was funny.