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for Hilltop Cottage

by neelix

person KellyJCR
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do I detect an unplanned pregnancy? Of course I could be wrong. Either way thanks for the quick update and not leaving us in limbo for to long. Glad to see she got some assistance from Harry in her quick escape. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I bet I know why Hermione's so nauseous all of a sudden...
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I REALLY want to shake them both now, LOL.
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh for pity's sake. Would someone just stun those two, dose them with veritiserum, and lock them in a room together...without their wands? Please? lol
person katiekrm
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a waste of flowers. Again. Severus is being an idiot. Again. Not that I can blame him for his low self-esteem. He did have a really shitty life. But Hermione definitely should have read the letter. Man! I wonder if she told Harry she was leaving. lol I kind of hope she didn't. He seems to have brushed her off for the most part. No one was ever a better friend to him than Hermione. But at least she received his flowers. Get our couple back together!
person KellyJCR
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow you have really taken this to the limit. I would have never dreamed this would be a turn one of your stories took. I'm livid at Severus and shocked at Hermione. Oddly enough I kind of expect that from him yet not from her. Although I do know that you said she is weary of fighting. I never thought she would have given up on him. After five years one would think Sev would have noticed the depth of emotion she has for him. You actually have me furious at a fictional character. I'm dying to find out where you take this next, and thanks for the quick update. I,m on the edge of my seat. Well done!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just don't even know what to say...oh, yes, I do. Please don't let them waste 6 months or more. They need to fix this!!! ARRGGGHHH!!! Angst to the highest degree. I have to admit, most angsty stories make me want to hit one or the other of these two...yours made me cry. She doesn't REALLY hate him does she? :(
Update soon! I can't stand this!!
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can't just leave it like that!! great cliff hanger, can't wait for the update. The break up chapter was rough, I hope he goes after her!!!
person Jinxie13
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh the stupid man! They're each hiding in their own way... Nicely done!
person marcia
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:((