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for The Expectant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is "Time of the Season" by The Zombies...you are really clever, not just with the song riddles, but this whole fic. I really enjoy the interplay between all of the characters. You do a really good job of making this AU, yet retaining a lot of the original characterization that makes them so special...you often stump me with your songs, but this is one of my favs :)
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THANKS FOR INCLUDING ANOTHER SONG THAT I KNOW AND LIKE. IT'S BY THE ZOMBIES AND IT'S TIME OF THE SEASON. I DID KNOW THAT LAST ONE BUT FELT IT WAS TOO LATE TO SEND IT IN. IT'S FUNNY THAT YOU USED THIS SONG SINCE I HAVEN'T HEARD IT FOR YEARS AND IT WAS ON THE RADIO YESTERDAY. STILL LOVE THE STORY. THANKS FOR WRITING.
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Time of the Season by (I think) the Zombies. God, I'm dating myself!
Really enjoying this story - fabulous depiction of two brilliant snarky people deeply in love.
Interesting choice giving Hermione the magical version of pre-eclampsia.
I look forward to seeing how she deals with the nightmare that is bedrest. Update soon please!
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
'The Time of the Season' by the Zombies. Sadly I missed the Alan Parsons and I'm ashamed because I owned that album in high school--on vynl. thanks to your lovely '60's Albus, I now have to get cookie crumbs out of my keyboard. :P Lovely chapter, have a great week!
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The "pregnancy hormones" chapter was hilarious. Never having been pregnant myself, I can only imagine.
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Right, they are back to square one, aren't they? Not sure of the perp, method is the only established fact, motive is unknown, crime scene is unknown. The only fact is that Malfoy Manor is the drop zone. Hopefully Sev has frightened the head of the Aurors enough to make them actually do some work. Hope Hermione feels better.
person Kim
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, great job! The story is moving along very well. I was just wonderin though why is it that in almost every fanfic Ive read does no one mention the killer heartburn that quite a few women get when pregnant? Almost every woman I know had it when they were pregnant including myself. I dont know just thought Id mention it. It really is terrible I felt like my head was going to explode eighteen hours a day. Lol. Keep up the good work!
person stray523
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Only 1% of what gets donated to Red Cross goes to the victims. A better charity to donate to would be either Doctors Without Borders or Mercy Corps. I really like the story so far too.
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the hormones angle, especially with her using it so well, even if she was trying to not do so. And the rest of the Aurors need to get off their asses and do some damn work, she isn't going to be available for consultations for much longer before one of them get hurt.
person Jennifer
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love everything I have read from you so far. Song is "Jump in the line" by Harry Belafonte. Gotta love Beetlejuice;)