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for The Expectant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person KellyJCR
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everybodys free to wear sunscreen by Baz Lurmann. (I'm sure I spelled his name wrong.) Great song and when it came out I din't realize how true most of the things he was saying were. Great update!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. No clue about the spoken word song thingie.
person genesismom
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for making this easy for me. this is last train to clarksville by the monkees. i loved watching their program when i was young. the stories are really great. thanks for writing.
person arrabella
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay song stuff first
Last Train to Clarksville by the Monkees
(I actually have some of their old vinyl record and have soem of their stuff on my Ipod)

Now for the review. It's great!!!!!
I like the "dead people" shows on TrueTV and this is starting to really be a great one. Wouldn;t have thought of make up or the pocket findings quite the same way. You Rock!
(They are affectionatly called dead people shows in our house cuz if someone isn't dead there is no show this was also figured out by a youngster whith "child logic" LOL)
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Nice chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the mystery unfolds.

The song is "Last Train to Clarksville" by the Monkees!
person KellyJCR
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the twists and turns the story is taking. The song is Last train to Clarksville by the Monkees. Unforntaly when I was in Grade school (eons ago) I had to perform this in my school choir. We performed it so much it made me hate the song. Can't wait till the next update. Well done!!!!
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, after all that info it's 'Last Train to Clarksville' by the Monkees. Davy Jones once said that as a corporate band it was as close to an anti-war song they could slip past the censors. All their other attempts got shot down before they even made it to the recording studio. Nice chapter, and I love her making Harry help with the autopsies!
person anncee
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And I must go, oh, no, no, no! oh, no, no, no! and I don't know if I'm ever coming hooooomee!! last train to clarksville by the monkees!! and psshhh cheap version of the beatles my butt! they outsold the beatles a couple of times i think..anyways i personally like the monkees better....don't get me wrong the beatles are definitely an american classic but they're just not my cup of tea :shrug: although i bet more people know the monkees' top single "i'm a believer" hehe =] i love your song puzzles at the end they're so much fun!! =D

Have I mentioned how much i love this story line? i love the whole harry potter/csi match up =] keep up the great work deary!!
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delightful! I'm glad you're doing a sequel to "The Reluctant Detectives." You write this with such charm and flair, they are a blast to read. Can't wait to see more.
person katiekrm
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am going to guess that the band's name is Hooters, but I have no clue on the song. Poor Dennis! Severus is such a good husband. It appears Hermione is getting that early pregnancy brain.