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for The Expectant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm. dead men are not so dead, eh? How interesting. How did they hide from the deathlog? They couldn't all have had magical namesakes.
person Tenar10r
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love cats - the cure
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not much of a clue (grumbles) when I'm sick I'm usually running for the loo. I love the way you have created a subculture for the elves, it's one of those thing we never got to see in JKR's world, but would have been there, just because of how people are. Nice going.
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens. Am really curious to see where this goes!

And the song is "The Lovecats" by the Cure :)
person Arrabella
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Song is "A Little Less Conversation-ELVIS PRESLEY" ( I am not crazy about the remix)
Okay now that is out of my system
LOve the HOT STEAMY love scene, simply because that is what it is, thinking about having the BF read some of your stuff to give him ideas LOL
Keep up the great story
person storm610
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A Little Less Conversation - by Elivs Presley!

This is a wonderful story, made even more fun with your song lyric game!
person Mia
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think it's called A Little More Conversation a Little More Action by The King. Elvis Presley. Mr. Rock n roll.

~Mia
person arrabella
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The song is "Watchin, the detectives by Elvis Costello" (can't remember if it was with or without the Attractions oh well) Perfect song for the next to the last chappie since it so closely follows the title.
As for the story every day U check to see if there is an update> This is getting good.
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snorfle* Severus and Bellatrix's painting...heh.
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Torturing a dead Bellatrix's portrait wouldn't be nearly as much fun as tying her up and showng her Voldemort's family tree. Then dosing her with Halcyon and sending her out to play in rush hour traffic. Loved the hair, hated the witch. By the way, where is Winky working these days?