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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can you put it on ff.net
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens after our favorite pairs first time. I wonder how long it is gonna take before people find out about their little oaths and just what type of master harry is going to turn out to be. Again I enjoyed it and looking forward to the next part.
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Score. I've always though Harry would have done much better with Hermione as is best friend instead of Ron. She was certainly his only loyal supporter (until her "Jean" lobotomy in HBP, anyways).
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liked it. Love slave stories with Hr/HP. Keep going will follow.
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start, can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great!
continuuuue,
Z.
continuuuue,
Z.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, what a great start. I hope you update soon for more. maybe you can give Harry some more girls that he will save, Like Ginny, Katie Bell, and Luna. You know Harry has a Saving thing. Just a thought.
Steve P
Steve P
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great start mate, I hope Hermione calls Harry Master now and then :P PLEASE update soon
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intresting start... I look foward to seeing how this changes the corse of the story and the development of Harry and Hermione as individuals. I love how he dosen't want her to be a slave (I know in your other review they were looking foward to him making her call him master but that dosen't seem to fit with the sweet boy you have made Harry seem to be in this chapter). Well I can't wait to see where you plan to take this so please continue to post. :)