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by AnythingBut

person Life
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope u continue this sounds like an awesome story! i crave a story that tells about harry and draco before the baby comes and harry is there and not fighting evil and draco is receptive to the idea of harry and the baby!YAYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYAAAAAAAAY!
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love that part at the end where draco is suddenly shy about touching himself. it was very cute and innocent
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Draco. It was sad he had to go through such pain. Anyways great chapter cant wait for your next one!
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it and can't wait for more!
person Black Padfoot
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... really looking forward to seeing more of this story! Excellent start! =)
Quick question: Have you looked into getting a beta? Overall the story is very good but there are a few punctuational errors here and there that could be easily fixed by having someone else look at it...
person Dezra
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i love a mpreg draco. looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds like an interesting take on M-preg. I usually avoid stories like this, but I like how you worked in the fact that female organs are needed!

I hope to see more soon!

-SI
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is very good. I really hope you continue. I have been reading some of your stuff for a while now and I'm a big fan!
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love mpreg, I'm excited to see where you take this. So far it's well written and has a great plot... keep going!
person paigeey07
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it!