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for Dark Times for Draco Malfoy

by Sparrowbirdie

schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I wonder if the Demon's Bane can kill Voldi for good....
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, looooved !!! Poor Draco... He is so sweet about Hermione.
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loooved
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved this chapter!
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I can't believe you wrote that! Poor Draco, being raped in front of his peers...
I had tears in my eyes. Loved the chater a lot!!!
person circe266
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter 7

Poor Draco! Just when it seemed that he was coming to terms with things, it truly does go "from bad to worse". I hope that his ordeal has hit rock bottom, and will start to improve a bit.

I like how you worked in some of the events from the books.

Nice job!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter!
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looooove :P
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused about timing in the first chapter. Events from 3rd year seems to be listed as 5th year activties. And making Snape and Slughorn both the potions professor in one part then correcting them. At one part they appeared to be the same person.
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow it wasn't until your last chapter that I realized that this story was distantly and loosely connected to your legends series(Which I love).

It's very well written, fascinating to read really. And I especially like the way you have Draco interacting with everyone else now; the way you have him changing his personality and perspectives are oddly pleasing compared to the backdrop that this story is anchored to.