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by Kayrox133

schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the wonderful world of writing on AFF.net!! You have taken your first step into becoming addicted to letting your plot bunnies run free and waiting anxiously for someone to review your work!

I enjoyed this story very much. I loved the premise of the foursome in the ROR and Lucius shagging Hermione's brains out. Simply genius (and hot). I haven't had a chance to read the squeal (homework sucks) but I will be sure to read that one as well when i'm finally free from the prison they call college.

You have so much potential as a writer and though i really enjoyed this story--I know that you will get even better as time goes by.

If you ever need help editing and getting a story line straight (can be difficult with a new baby taking up all of your time) I will be more than happy to beta. My email is in my profile.

Until next time when I review your next story!

Love, hugs, and kisses

koolgirl18

P.S. Thank you bundles for reading and reviewing my own fanfic--especially with a new baby in the picture. You are a beast (and i only mean that in the nicest slang term lol)
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great I really like it. Great lemons very tasty. Hope you have a wonderful day thanks so much for sharing.
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy story! I love your characterizations! Please continue!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I am looking forward to seeing more thanks for sharing