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Another great chapter, thanks. I get bothered how Hermione still chooses to go for the older ugly (according to the books) guy but not give the young handsome man a chance, but i can't say anything because I've had my friends complain to me about the same thing in the past.

3: Ah, circumstances, circumstances...go Draco! But poor Hermione and too bad Severus is being fair. Though I thought that Lucius and Draco were avid enthusiasts of Muggle movies & television a bit OOC. I mean, maybe a little, but such avid watching? I dunno... It was a very enjoyable chapter though!

Loved the third chapter. As for the Christian overtones, I don't have a problem with it, and I'm a practicing Catholic. Actually, I seem to recall an interview with JKR that brought up that very topic. She had Lucius use the name of the Deity back in the GoF book when he's insulting Arthur in the Ministry box and the Quidditch World Cup. He says, 'Lord, Weasley...' or some such. JKR specifically wanted to keep a particular mainstream religion out of the books, (she's probably Church of England, though I don't know for sure), focussing only on the actual idea of Good and Evil without the trappings of religion to 'muddy' it up, I think. But, that being said, I don't think it's a problem that you have Hermione having been raised in a religious house. I'm sure many Muggleborns would have had the same experience. Seamus Finnigan comes to mind. :D Thanks for the update, and do more soon. I hope this'll end up being a Dramione, too. :D

Oh, and I was re-reading some of the reviews. I think what you've done with the Wolfsbane is fine. I believe, in the books, that it allows the werewolf to keep more of his human characteristics during the transformation. In other words, he does not act like a wild, rabid wolf. In point of fact, in PoA, Lupin had NOT taken his potion when he transformed....he'd forgotten it. So the wolf they had to confront in the movie was a wild wolf. I do not believe the reviewer who said the potion only keeps the transformation from happening until moonshine occurs was correct. But, I would suggest looking at the Harry Potter Lexicon. I am sure there are essays and all of JKR's interviews collected there which would touch on the subject.

Looved! Especially at the Burrow, that sounded like a perfect evening out.

This is gearing up to be a fascinating read! I love the fact that Snape and Hermione are having an affair, that is so delicious...
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks.

Good story, I hope you update soon

2: I really like this chapter. Their competition with each other is funny...Draco should just suck it up and admit defeat (but I doubt that'll happen anytime soon). Lucius' shock is very realistic and well, I don't feel sorry for him. The way that Severus just dropped the bomb...well. I guess, blunt is the way to go. LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter! =D

love it cant wait to read more, i dont really like hermione/snape fiction, but i think you've written it in brilliantly, i cant wait to see if he'll offer her the malfoy ring later on in the fic now that she knows what it means!!

Cannon update.Wolfbane potion keeps the werewolf from changing unless they are struck by moonbeams, Remember Lupin did not turn into a werewolf until the moon came out from the cloud. Before wolfbane potion the werewolf changed as soon as the full moon appeared, it did not matter if it was cloud covered or not. James, Sirius, and Peter become Anamagi to keep Remus company in the Shrieking Shack before the wolfbane potion was developed. It was considered a new potion. Thus if the werewolf took the potion and stayed indoors they would not change into a wolf. LOL I write trivia test for another web page on the Harry Potter books. If you have any questions feel free to ask. There is also HP Lexicon to check on spells and potions.

If this is the only non-cannon thing I can find you are doing great. Keep writing and update soon.