rate_review Reviews

Ooo, adding Ginny sounds like fun! But preferably as a threesome, rather than some one-off Boy-Who-Lived shag. Oh, maybe if Ginny decides she likes eating out Hermione while Harry pounds her hard, maybe Hermione could show off her polyjuice kinks and then she could become Harry too, and both could shag her and then Ginny would get two Harrys! LOL

it was great.

*grumbles* I hadda sign up for an account so I could review this.

Anyway, I enjoy the story itself, however, your time line is /really/ confusing. Time turner happens in third year, Hermione gets pregnant, and they leave, by the time they have the baby, Hermione is 15 at the oldest (because she's nearly a year older than Harry), a year later Hermione's hit 17 (in your story), and able to cast magic, what? And then she makes mention of the time turners being destroyed when Voldemort came back, I can only assume this refers to the Department of Mysteries incident... which wouldn't have happened if Harry and Hermione left school at the end of third year.

Timeline out of the way, I do have a question. I'm assuming that at some point Harry will be 'Hermione' and Hermione will be 'Harry', and they'll have sex... do you think it's possible for a polyjuiced male to get pregnant? And if so, would it be possible to "carry over", if you will? I mean, the juice only lasts for an hour, unless you take it repeatedly (a la Moody!Crouch), so it's not like you'd know about the embryo at all. So I suupose it's something of a nonsense question. But it's sat in my mind since the mention of polyjuicing Harry/Hermione to reverse their roles. I mean, what if the magic sensed the beginning of life, and 'it' stopped Harry from turning back? Anyway, enough rambling on my part.

I look forward to the next chapter.

it was great.

Pretty good, but while Hermione's birthday is indeed September 19, she is the older of the couple, being born almost a year before Harry. If she were a month or two older, she'd have been a second year when Harry started.

will harry find out the truth of how hermione really got pregnant?

Great chapt!
Continue,
Z.

Another great chapter.

Sexy stuff. I like stories with lactation, almost as much as I like them with big, round, pregnant girls (hint hint). Anyway, keep writing.
SailorNemesis

i like this story but if possible make hermione slip up and tell harry how she got pregnant and harry gets pissed off and then makes her take him back in time so he can be pleased by multiple hermione's or something ^^