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by starstruck86

person morganabythesea
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving everything as always!!! :-)
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another one!

*mutters about trying to keep up with prolific authors*


You're going to have a lot of fun building the tension up on this one, aren't you?

And Ron should have known that you don't come between a man and his custard. hehehehe

Can't wait until your weekend break and another new chapter is posted.
person abbicee
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This promises to have some sparks flying around for a bit. I'm looking forward to the fireworks. So will Severus appologize or hold firm?
person hairsprayX12
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah...Sev can be a bit of a wanker :P

I'm really enjoying them trying to get the best of one another, and of course Sev just loves to be such an ass. Ron is so frigging hot when he comes off all smart ass like...heee...

They really do strike sparks off each other, don't they?

You know what would be funny, if Ron had a rival for Sev's affection, hee, Ron would get all jealous and poor Severus would be all oblivious

Once again awesome beginning to what I'm sure will be another equally awesome Ron and Severus fic.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So wonderful. I love the bitting sarcasm and the tension between the two. I can't wait to see how this develops
person talley
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like hearing both voices. Like antagonistic Snape. Like how all the professors are rallying around Snape like after hours get togethers and how they feel they can chide him about Ron. I'm excited about this one especially since you say it's going to be more of a build up.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a start. I love that Ron and Snape are so hostile to each other. I know they will be at odds for a while, but wow, the things they say.

Love this story. I can't wait to read more.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Can't wait for more.
person Sheree
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know where to begin - I love the snits and snaps! Not to mention the self flagulation and the spiteful thoughts. This looks delicious and can't wait for more!
person kai
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! a new snape/ron fic. i'm very happy! and another dh compliment, i like this one. snape back as postions master and ron as a quidditch coach, awesome. can't wait to see how their relationship develops.

also you mentioned ron owning toys?! any chance a chapter of him playing with said toys. MUHAHAHAHAHA...

I REALLY WANT IT. PLEASE!!!