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Ah you're killing me! Must go reread Don't Let the Whirlwind Pass By to get my fulfillment of smut. Seriously, though, I'm loving this story. Definitely hooked. And this line made me literally laugh out loud: "Not a submissive

My, My! All this snip snip snipping going on. Oh yeah, they're definitely going to do it!

I'm so ashamed, I'm obviously going to have to watch Priscilla again because I missed the reference.

BTW, I'm starting in on Hold Me Now. Now I can't get the Thompson Twins out of my head.

Oh, the mistletoe would have been too easy for this story. I love the sexual tension you have Severus going through. He's perfect in his pent up way. Ron is a bit clueless, but I suppose that he's like his mother, once he has an idea in his head, he just can't give it up.

I'd say our two heroes are neck and neck on the two wrongs not making a right. I did feel for Snape when Ron called him a greasy bastard. That would be a slap in the face after the somewhat overt flirting Snape was doing with the strawberries. (Which, by the way was a very nice, slightly steamy scene, even if it was one-sided.)

Lovely chapter. I just wish you could write faster. Not that I"m pressuring you,really. I just love this story as much as I loved Seraphim. The way you write these two, they have real chemistry.

How much do I love the snark that flies out of Sev's mouth and Ron just can't seem to guard his tongue either...lol...

I can't wait to see all that pent up passion unleashed :)

They just crack me up, especially when they have those little conversations with themselves inside their heads, best one liners ever!!!

Damn, I know I say this a lot but...its true...you write Ron and Sev so damn well!!!!

You capture their personalities so well, and no matter what the story is you always manage it make it interesting, funny, emotional, hot, sexy, and just a bit naughty.

These two mesh so perfectly with one another, or at least the way you write them they do.

It's so much fun to watch them get on each others' nerves but really that just proves how much they can influence each other. And I have to admit I love snarky Severus and smart ass Ron.

I'm in cheap dime store novel heaven. This is great - does he/doesn't he, is he/isn't he, back and forth - Oh don't let this end - keep stretching this until it snaps.

Can't wait for the next installment.

i love that you included the toys but it was interrupted so quickly!! but at least we got a jealous severus. great job as always. can't wait for the next installment!

Great chappie! That Dunn has got some balls, eh? I had to laugh at Molly showing up to the infirmary. Poor Ron!

And more custard. You don't fool me, you know. I just KNOW you'll have them do something positively filthy with that particular desert eventually.


At any rate, it's looking up to be an interesting time now that Severus has caught the Weasley virus.

enjoying the slow build up to the real smutty stuff. that last line was a real tease...

Nice build up of sexual tension for Snape. I wonder when Ron's going to get a clue about just why they hate each other so much. Severus is on his way.

Lovely bit with the student. I'm glad Snape decided to do something about it before Ron had to ask him to.

I am really enjoying this story, but can't write more. I think I have the flu.