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Wow! Intense chapter! I was having a really crap day but you made me smile with Albus' favorite song and the mental image of Ron and Harry bumping bums and Albus clapping happily from his portrait.

As for the ending...well my my, the proverbial shit is about to his the proverbial fan I suspect.

Thanks for the update!

I don't know who I want to beat more up side the head, Severus for being such a gloomy, the glass is half empty kind of guy or Ron, for being such a hot head and not being able to express himself kind of guy :P

I love these two so much!!!! They give me the giddies!!!!!

If there isn't more of this story soon, I'm going to scream bloody murder and go at my laptop with a hatchet! Please! I love this story. It's written so well. More?

I really like this story. It's such an interesting pairing but you write it beautifully.

OMGG!!!!!!

This chapter had me cracking up so bad. Seriously, they both need to get a clue, and loved Harry and Hermoine being the ones to "giving" Ron a clue, and how appropriate that both Ron and Sev wanked off thinking of one another, heh...

All I can say is...Ron with a nipple piercing? Yum!

awesome! i come back from vacation and i get 2 chaps to read!! awesome! i loved it. that shower scene OMFG! and ron no longer being oblivious is of the good! great job as usual! can't wait for the next one.

How can I keep up with you? I'm fancinated by your duel fic on lj and this one is getting better and better. I like the easiness of Ron's relationship with Harry and Hermione in this one. I hope there is more interaction. Ron always seems to be alone when he has decisions to make. Hermione is the brightest witch of her age isn't she. *grins* I find the little explosion to be small warning, no? I would also like to note that you bring up his scars which many writers fail to do. Even JK seemed to forget them lol. I say thank you for that. Ack. No new chapter for a while uh? Well as long as you do come back and not forget our Ron and Snape since you've got yourself in other pairings too.

They're dancing around each other so much that by the time one of them decides to make the first move, they'll be too exhausted to pucker....or anything else.

A dance coming up, eh? I can't wait to see what you'll do with that!

A face like a smacked arse? Remember that line in Priscilla where Bernadette tells Tick that he's "got a face like a cat's arse"? I thought of that when I read that (now that you've got me back on Priscilla).

And of course Ron's chocolate consumption is up. He's got to substitue sex for something after all.

Mwahahahahahaha! the shower scene! I loved Snape valiantly trying to cover up his arousal, while still being snarky. Lovely bit of writing and you have me convinced that Ron, though not the brightest wizard of his age, has his canny moments.

Love the sexual tension, but I have to tell you that when you had Snape trounce Ron during the Valentine's day breakfast, I cringed. That was entirely uncalled for, and I'm glad he got a bit of pay back with the concussion.

Thanks for making this so original. I really love the way the story is going.