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by starstruck86

schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. It's my second-most favorite of your stories. Seraphim remains my first. Thanks for sharing it with us.
person chudeusz
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, haha, I loved it! Ron and his flowery glittery baths:) That one detail made this good fic a brillant one. I hope you write more, thanks:)
person hairsprayX12
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squeee!!!!!!

I knew it would be mind blowing when they got together!!! :D and in Ron's old childhood room!!! LMFAO when Sev thought it was hell because of all the orange!!! Classic!!!!

This story was so much fun to read, just the way they interacted with one another and Snotty Ron and Snarky Severus at their best!!!!
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And a fine ending it was too. Of course I'll be hovering for Ron and Severus' next adventure.



I see my prediction about the custard was accurate.
person talley
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful and fun ending to this romance. Adds custard to the body delight list. ;) I enjoyed this one alot. As you know I mentioned wanting to see them fit the relationship into school life and so on. This was a nice glimpse of that. I look forward to any story you write involving Ron, but I do so adore your Severus. Again, enjoyed this and loved loved the image of Ron holding his teddy bear.
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was definitely worth it. Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next one!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sigh. At least they're getting closer. I'm evil. I was hoping Severus would press Ron about what he was doing in his quarters that night and Ron would have to tell him about his toy. That would have been funny.

You'll like this, I had on some Dropkick Murphys while I was reading this. During the pub scene, guess what song happened to be playing. I lie not but it was 'Kiss me, I'm shitfaced.'


I thought it was hilariously appropriate.
person kai
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved that they were set up with each other on the blind date. awesomeness! i loved it. and that that ultimatum that ron gave, nice. I like it, i wonder, is he going to make it by 9 or not. ^_^ the suspense, i can't wait. update soon!!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like everything worked out in the end, but I'm sure Pomona will have to pay with more than a check. I'm glad Ron didn't jump at the chance to sleep with Snape. The man needs to be reminded how very much he hurt Ron. Hopefully, Severus will be there at six in the morning and there will be fantastic pre-holiday sex.

I really enjoyed the chapter and look forward to more.

person Anon
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so close, sooooooooo close....

Geez woman!!!

Loved the bits with Sprout and the whole bubble bath thing, made me crack up...

How much longer must I suffer :P