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for Carridwen

by chelbear

schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...simply wow...
I really am enjoying your fic! I can't wait for another update. I love the way you describe things (it's really quite powerful). I always try to do that but I maybe get like one chapter in and then my decribing goes out the window.
I like the way you write with Luna, she very whimsical...and your plot...HOLY CRAP!! When you're writing your newspaper articles it's reminicent of J.K. Rowling so props to you!
I also enjoy the fact that Harry happens to have a piercing, very hot if I may add. :)
I just wish I knew more French..haha!
Anywho, can't wait for more!!!!
Please update asap!! :D
Thank you for writing this.
albino goddess
person Amy
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I need the next chapter up!! I love this story. I love it when we get a perspective into both of their lives before things get really heated up, it always makes it seem more real. I especially love Draco as a DJ and the way you describe him playing his music; it feels like I'm really there dancing along!
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And heelloesssssssssssss once more! So I took your advice, which I thank you form and read stories from Cheryl Dyson, I lurved the pirate one! xD Draco was all like.. Eawr... and Harry was all like, being a bossy bottom. For some reason I get this feeling that Pansy and Luna are going to end up together in this story though.. :O Hmmm I hope you update soon or else I will like... do something you really don't want me to do so.. [insert awful thing here].

The End! :D
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sooo loved how Draco couldn't stop thinking about Harry! And the little jealous bit! Lovely! Now on to chapter 13 please!!!!
person Kry-chan
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey :) Really nice story! I like the jobs you chose for Harry and Draco, they make sense :) I totally see Draco as an Artist(capital A and shitty attitude included XD) If ever you need help for the french parts though contact me, there are quite a few mistakes in chapter 2(I am french so I guess that would be perfect, no? :P )
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Love when you post lyrics for songs at the beginning of each chapter. I listen to those songs when I read this story. Good taste in music.

1901-Phoenix = Pure Genius!
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awz, I loves this story. Can't wait for you to write more!!
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 12!!! I love how they are just mesmerized by each other!
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaay update! *runs around screaming waving Harry/Draco flags around* I had already read the foot fetish one.. I hunted for smut on your page, muwahahahah! So yeah.. I was all like 'Omgosh what?!' at the beginning because of the 'thinking of last night'. I was almost afraid you wouldn't even tell me what happened! But yeah, Harry totally needs to go to the loft some more (or somewhere else where Draco plays) and roawr... *waggly eyebrows* ...you know :)

person tiggator
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*blush* Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you like my stories too. I'm so happy to hear there will be more updates to this one. I definitely can't wait! :)