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for Salvation

by clairevictoria

schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. You did really well in meshing the characters together while deviating from the original universe. Nicely done.
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wha? Down size the chapter? But! But! But!

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LOL XD

I have nothing against it. Short, long, the quantity doesn't matter but the quality. And I adore the quality of the story!!
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
i would just like to say i love this story, and i personally love longer chapters... believe me, the nights i become an insomiac, stories like these help a great deal :). Anyhow, its a brill story and despite the valid questions being posed... we must remember it is fanfiction after all, and as long as the warnings are in place no foul to me.
Eagerly(?) awaiting the next chapter. appologies for the poor use of grammar and spelling! lol.
person Kat9jr
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I also love the long chapters. Long chapters make the wait for new chapters easier because readers can tell how much time and effort the author put into the story. Keep up the amazing work.
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I think the length of your stories are just fine to me. I love being able to find a new chapter up and have enough time to curl up into the story instead of feeling like ive been cheated with a couple of paragraphs. And as far as the graphic scenes go, I enjoyed them particularly not because of how graphic but because it was relevant to the story. I think you've been doing an excellent job, with or without reviews.
person Hine
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I -LOVE- this story! Please! Don't change a thing! I love that your chapters are so long! It makes the waiting for the updates all the more worth while!!!
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredibly awesome (and EPIC) story, I mean dear gods, each chapter could be it's own novella! It takes me 2-3 hours to read one chapter! That's HIGHLY impressive! I want to say 'update soon' but, with how long the chapters are, I understand if it takes you awhile to write them. However, i WILL be waiting patiently for the next one when you post it, I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just wanted to drop you a review about this story. I only stumbled across it a few days ago, and having not read it despite this being a repost, i had a look. Its wonderfully written, with passionate romance with different varieties of character and lifestyle. I couldn't stop reading after the first one, and its excited me immensely since when you updated.

I'd just like to say continue on, my dear, such a wonderful talent need not be wasted.... :)
person QueenB
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 Whoa, this story is just one shock after another. Solarin has a Dark Mark! Cue the scary music! Dum-dum-DUM!!

Seriously, though, this IS a bit much. We could have just had Bellatrix going after Sirius. They ARE cousins and she
person QueenB
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6 I