rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say how much I love reading this story. Its wonderful in its mythology and character development and... lol, just everything really. I was so excited when I saw the new chapter up, I read it in one sitting. I am now exhausted. XD

Really have enjoyed it so far. I've read it all in one sitting too. Hope you decide to continue it.

Absolutly wonderful story. I wouldn't change anything, except to update soon. Please update soon. Do you send notices when you update? If you do please add me

Loooved! Finally found the time to read the last three chapters (got sick)) and really enjoyed it!

I just discovered this story and I am in awe! The storyline is amazingly unique. The characterizations are believable & in-depth. This is absolutely one of the best fanfics out there. I am astounded by your inspiring talent in pulling a reader into the story so deeply that they experience every moment and every emotion. I am ecstatic to know that this is a current WIP, and I have to tell you that I love the long chapters because it gives the story more depth. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing tale with us, your readers. :)

You know, I'm actually quite fond of the lengths of the chapters. I have to say that it's quite refreshing when other stories are so short, your's are wonderfully long. I was iffy at first to read it but got so into it that I could barely put it down! It actually quelled my craving for a novel and kept me guessing throughout. I loved it and have been reading Shamrock, which by the way was equally as amazing.

Please, continue as you have been doing because what you've been doing has worked!

Love your story! I don't usually like OC but you have developed amazing characters. I am checking every day for the next chapter and speaking of chapters I love your long chapters. It makes for a nice long read and I love it.

ok so i just finished chapter 3, and I love this story. I've been reading it for a couple of days...Those chapters are long, but it doesn't really take away from it!
i actually wanted to comment about this when i finished chapter 2, but i couldn't stop reading.
Dylan is a perfectly acceptable girls name. well that was my two cents. I absolutely love Miri tho, and now Pheonix!!! I love your story, and I'm gunna continue reading, so i can catch up!!
Great Story!
-Dylan

I knew that baby was going to be a girl. For two reasons, 1) because in nearly every mpreg story I read, the baby is a girl. I'm having trouble finding baby boys, and I find them to be so much more adorable than girls *sigh* 2) With how they were pushing the 'it's a boy' thing without actually checking, I had a feeling a twist was coming. And then when Luna bet is was going to be a girl, that was it. I wonder how Lucius is going to react, he was expecting a boy. I wonder if a girl would be good enough for him.

And btw, I noticed that I think you had Charlie written as the older brother. Bill's actually the oldest. I know for awhile I wasn't completely sure which was older but the order is: Bill, Charlie, Percy, Fred and George, Ron and Ginny. I have it all memorized now :-D

Anyways I'm loving this story and you're really long chapters. And now I'm going to go back and continue reading because I've only just finished the 2nd chapter.

So I love this story, its totally not my normal read and I love it! Everything is out of the normal for me, from the pairing to the originial characters to the themes but I am super glad I started reading it. I love all your original characters and how they fit so well into the story line. I want to cry with Harry when Lucius is being a jerk and I do laugh and smile when things are going well. And even though your chapters are really long its still an nice read, because I know that I'll have something to keep me entranced for a good while. I think that you are doing an amazing job and shouldn't change how your doing any of it, its turning out to be a great fanfic and I'm thoroughly glad that I started reading it in the first place, despite my initial hesitation.