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They is certainly a lot going on in this chapter, what a bombshell they found in that diary. Lucius is still out there and emotionality is rampant throughout their family unit. Good thing they are all so adaptable.

I'm certain I've read this before but it is even better this time around. There is a reasonable recovery time and method for Harry and woot! after reading your Mauraders prequel I'm thrilled to find a Harry∆Severus fic follows. I admire your ability to write Lucius and Draco in very different lights yet still believable.

Excellent chapter, even better the second time around. Forgot about Dracoina, or Phoenix I suppose, crazy Lucius and the whole Narcissa being such a bad mom.

OMG! Could not stop long enough to review till I reached "the end". This story is fantastic! Very well written with a little bit of everything it needs. PLEASE tell me it won't be abandoned!

OMG OMG OMG. First off, thank you for continuing the story. I'm pretty sure at some point you said you wouldn't end up abandoning it, but waiting near close to a year for updates can be a little trying. However, that being said, the updates are well welcomed and always amazing. In fact I usually have to re-read the entire story before I can get to the updated chapter just so I can be sure of what happened. This chapter was definitely interesting. Especially with Harry going on his first vacation, lots of Miri firsts which are tooth achingly adorable. Of course I enjoy the little snippets of everyone else's lives in the large family that is the inhabitants of Grimmauld Place. The confrontation with Fenrir and Bellatrix was nice, though it adds questions that I will compile at the end since I have lots over the course of reading this story. Solarin being in the hospital definitely is a scary thing and since you put it on a cliff hanger I'm definitely going to be hoping that everything goes well. As always, you're writing is always a pleasure to read and it certainly brightened my week when I saw there was a new chapter. You always make it worth the wait.

Now I have a couple of questions that I've come up with throughout the course of re-reading the story. I'm simply keeping to questions that I feel like haven't been explained exactly. I have a few more than the ones listed, but I know those will more than likely be explained later as they are central questions to the plot or you set events up to be then cleared in the coming chapters.

1. Why hasn't anyone thought to ask Minister Fudge, though idiotic he may be, change the laws on hermaphrodites? I mean the Augur Laws had to have been just as old as the hermaphrodite ones? After Harry's terrible experience, why hasn't anyone thought for them to be changed?
2. How is it that the Aurors weren't able to capture Bellatrix and Fenrir when they attacked Sirius, Remus and Solarin? I mean Moody was there. And how can Lucius continuously keep appearing and then not get caught?
3. How are both Dorian and Daven magical whilst there parents aren't? And how was Sophia able to tell with Daven when the baby couldn't show any sign of magic?

You don't have to answer any questions if you feel they will be explained in future chapters. Keep up the amazing work.

Great update! Interesting to get a glimpse of what the blond bastard is doing.

Ch. 9

I really hope you haven't abandoned this fic. I for one want to know what happens next.

i wish this was continued. i love it

I have enjoyed what has been written so far and look forward to the next chapter. I wish there was a way to be notified of an update. I look forward to the naming of the new little girl, the trip to the zoo, and the Potter-Snape family trip, not to mention the trouble Lucius is planning.

Eagerly anticipating the next chapters! I love the story so far and the realness of Harry's recovery. Although, Grimmauld Place is getting awful crowded! Here's hoping that house is huge! :)