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Please update the post said the last chapter was done last year so looking forward to seeing what happens next 

I love this story and hope you update again soon. One of the best written stories I've read.

I really hope you finish this story its very good

I read the first one and loved it. Enjoying this one too but I think the original was a hair better...or maybe it's my memory. It was a ways back. What is Percy thinking about?? What's wrong with him? How's Fred making out without George by his side all the time??

Hey, been reading up to chapter 5 so far and really enoying it. I love Severus sister Solarin( although Serenity is mentioned once and then never again, wierd. You would think SEverus would have SOME memories of growing up with her but nope, just that one mention of another sister.)and enjoy Harrys interction with his daughter. I did think it was pretty wierd for Arthur to give Harry such an expensive gift. Raise or no raise, you would think he would want to save up to rebuild his home or support his teenage son and his 2 grandkids but nope, everybody is gonna sponge of sirius some more. Thats another point I was wondering about.Arthur works,Bill works, Charlie is usually working in Romania so now he is...not? Severus ...sells potions? maybe? While the others just hang around and take care of the kids and the house? Who is actually creating the income in this family ??? Are they all sponging off Sirius till kingdom come? Do you realize how expensive nappys are????

Just all the chapters...this is not just a story but a saga! Events or feelings don't always mesh from chapter to chapter and there are sooo many new characters coming & going or some staying that I really have to concentrate when reading. It is a great intricate saga of a family, a big family, but a very very interesting one. Thoroughly enjoying it and anxious for more chapters.

Perhaps the chapters were not all properly posted, since I can't recall all of this. Enjoying the story very much and glad for a chance to reread it.

There's a lot of life trueism in this chapter. The interactions are interesting, Severus is incredible - it is extremely difficult to switch between lover and caretaker roles; although his past and their previous relationship help a lot. I like your Ron too. Harry's PTSD makes sense but that doesn't make it easy to deal with.

Well a lot of things are happening and going on relationship wise but I'm glad they've got ways of support to be able to all stay together. Would have expected Harry to go stuff crazy by now. Actually considered Tonks and Sam as an item. An odd thing, there seems precious little information in JKR's or most fanfics about other countries govt; it is sometimes mentioned that they don't persecute magical beings but there seems no true info to counteract the horrid misinformations of the British magical Ministry.

I believe I've mentioned before I like the long chapters and lengthy story. It flows. Also, your depictions of situations tend to be very accurate. Specifically the Remus being under scene is an example, although it simply isn't possible to prepare for something like seeing your mate intubated and realizing you might not have the chance to say goodbye.

There is a lot going on and more plot twists occurring every chapter but you still this up loose ends. Like another reviewer wrote- you build your stories like a house with a good foundation and framework.