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person KellyJCR
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The comics at work are going to your head!LOL. Although the thought of Severus as batman in the latex is yummy. Can't wait to see who gets the king next. However I would PAY big money to see Draco as the boy wonder. Well done!!!!!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA I LOVE IT!! The humor and fun was a perfect mix! I think Lucius should earn the "king" next since he figured out what happened between Sev and Hermione. Then Draco can try to outdo his father! Buyt in anycase, whichever order you writeit in will be wonderful as always!! \

"Queens" to you, my lovely, for such brilliant writing!!

Love and Hugs!
Lady B*
person vintagejgc
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this.
1. I completely got the visual of Lucius as Thor. (thank you for that)
2. The bat of the dungeons was a fantastic giggle, and the break away cod piece was an excellent touch.
3. Can Severus keep the king for one more chapter? =)
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG wow...I will have to try that with my boyfriend! That was just....hot

Can't wait for the next update!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit..that was a great story. picturing Snape in a batman costume was perfect. cant wait to read more..hope to read more soon too..
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
tee hee, love the premise of this. very clever as all your stuff is!! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! and i love the image of Severus as batman, majorly sexy and... *drools* sorry where was I. Lost my train of thought, oh well lol and Lucius as Thor, god that nearly killed me from laughter and sexiness!!

Funnily enough I just read LRRH for my German Fariytales class. And when we read it we also read the original original tale (Grimms wasn't the first) and then spinoffs of it.

this is the original, highly disturbing: http://www.pitt.edu/~dash/type0333.html#millien
this is the best one, Roald Dahl's version: http://www.xs4all.nl/~ace/Literaria/Txt-Dahl.html
I thought of the second one when reading this because of the knickers lol. It made me smile.

Can't wait to read the next installment!!
person kittycat30
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story - I just can't remember if the actor wearing the first nipples was Kilmer or Clooney... No matter as both are, hmmm, yummy! I'd vote for Draco next, but it doesn't matter that much. I'll read it & love it as always!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely afternoon treat! Who's afraid of the big, black bat -- well not Hermione. Oh and by the way, can you send Lucius over in that Thor costume, I think he would make my Halloween quite wonderful! I think Lucius should be next.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was delightfully funny and sexy. I loved the choice of costumes. Draco, dressed as Robin is too funny. I'd love to hear Mionne ridicule him while, at the same time, seducing him. Then, I see Lucius turning the tables on her, somehow. LOL Looking forward to the next installment.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...perhaps Draco next, or a Batman-Red Riding Hood-Robin threesome be4 the end of the night? Yummy. Of course, the fur loincloth is just begging for fun, so... Whatever happens, Hermione wins!

J.