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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) Can't wait for the next update.
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! Even i knew about the birds an the bees at that age, god how confusin would it be to go through puberty an not know whats happenin! Please let me know when u update my email is charlie-becks@manx.net thanx!
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey, im really enjoying this story. it's original & well written. im liking the slow discovery snape is making of harry's past & the way you're letting us see both sides of the story. looking forward to updates!
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is nice to read a story that involves interesting POV from both of the main characters. It is different and enjoyable. Please finish this story. Many authors offer only a few chapters before they leave the site. If you do this I may have to hex you.
~Silver Falls
~Silver Falls
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh plz put some more on, I kinda like where this is going, I mean it seems true to me that Harry would be clueless given his upbringing, and it would be...turmoil for Snape to end up with feelings like this, *laughs evilly* It does seem a lil cruel to just leave us all hanging here.....so please continue, I love where this is going. if you've ever read any HP that i've done i'm either a Snape tormenter or a Harry Snape, lol and this is a bit of both worlds!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please! I want them to get together! please finish the story!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I dont mind the shifting of perspective as long as you do two things: tell us when perspective shifts and continue this story! That being said, I love this fic.
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol see where it goes
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far :) Admitedly I've just finished chapter one, so I'll read the next in a moment ;)
Yeah, he would have had 'the talk' at school before Hogwarts. We had ours in Year Four, so we would have been 8-9 years of age, but of course a child can only attend those classes with parents permission, it's possible that the Dudleys' being who they are that they wouldn't have consented to such lessons, so it'd make sense Harry would still be clueless. It's probably for the best anyways, we had to watch a video of someone giving birth, it's enough to put you off sex for life 0_0
Anyways, to get on track ;) I love your characterisation so far, you really capture the characters personality whilst still giving a sense of naiviety in some and anxiety in others. I also love the mixture of drama and humour, it's a very well-done technique, sometimes people can make humour in fanfics quite amateurish, but you did a great job :) I look forward to reading more, I really do!
Yeah, he would have had 'the talk' at school before Hogwarts. We had ours in Year Four, so we would have been 8-9 years of age, but of course a child can only attend those classes with parents permission, it's possible that the Dudleys' being who they are that they wouldn't have consented to such lessons, so it'd make sense Harry would still be clueless. It's probably for the best anyways, we had to watch a video of someone giving birth, it's enough to put you off sex for life 0_0
Anyways, to get on track ;) I love your characterisation so far, you really capture the characters personality whilst still giving a sense of naiviety in some and anxiety in others. I also love the mixture of drama and humour, it's a very well-done technique, sometimes people can make humour in fanfics quite amateurish, but you did a great job :) I look forward to reading more, I really do!
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you've made my night! I gave a peek at this story (for the billionth time), and saw there was a chapter two and very nearly died of joy. (Enough that I'm reviewing, even though I'm just godawful at the damn things and babble too much).
As to the perspective jumping, well. heh. Consistency is always nice, but as you call chapter two a 'companion', I say don't think about it too hard. Companion fics are a world all their own anyway.
Besides, it would be intensely cruel of you, to leave us all hanging without the boys eventually getting some much-needed (and much deserved) action. Personally, I like my happy endings (after the appropriate amount of torment and inner turmoil) - especially in those cases where Snape gets shagged. Just a thought.
I say, more please! It's so rare that I can say I truly adore a story, but this one is definitely on my list.
As to the perspective jumping, well. heh. Consistency is always nice, but as you call chapter two a 'companion', I say don't think about it too hard. Companion fics are a world all their own anyway.
Besides, it would be intensely cruel of you, to leave us all hanging without the boys eventually getting some much-needed (and much deserved) action. Personally, I like my happy endings (after the appropriate amount of torment and inner turmoil) - especially in those cases where Snape gets shagged. Just a thought.
I say, more please! It's so rare that I can say I truly adore a story, but this one is definitely on my list.