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Love this story. I finally registered with the site so i could leave reviews and rate your story. Cannot wait for the smex to come. *gets all giggly at the thought of lemony smex* eeeep i'm hoping you up date pretty quickly.

More! More!! More!!! *g*
I can hardly wait for ... more ;o)
Please update soon *makes puppy dog eyes*:

this is a great story can you do more pleaase i realy hope that they get together and in that chamber to that would be cool

It took me entirely too long to get around to reading this. I was just drowning in this fic I was writing and...time got away from me. But I love it, as usual. Albus is a devious bastard, lol. But my FAVORITE part has to be that the words that get to Harry the most are 'thank you'. That's genius, right there.

OMG! this is so good!i can't wait to see what "pops" up next:) thank you for updating this

Wow. Your story is absolutely amazing. I haven't read a story this fantastic and compelling in a long time. I love innocent, desperate Harry and covetous, unnerved Snape.

I've been in the fandom for a few years now, and I must say that your characterization of Snape is the best I've ever read. It bugs me when he's portrayed in fics as one of two extremes: either a mean, cruel pervert or a gentle, loving significant other. But your Snape is how I think he should be: bitter with a mean streak, but still caring and loyal. Everything from his confusion about having misjudged Harry to his frustration and affection for Dumbledore seemed--oh hell, I'll say it--canon. And I love that he's not giving into his feelings for Harry yet (although he does eventually...right?!). His inner struggle is very realistic, but isn't featured prominently in other fics--if at all.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. I think I've only ever written five or six fic reviews, so this is definitely a change for me. Oh, and if you ever need a beta, feel free to shoot me an email. I've had a plethora of experience and am actually interested in copy editing for a living.

Good luck! Please update soon!

I love the Snape and Dumbledore conversation here - seeing Snape open (as much as he ever will) and just wigging the hell out. And Dumbledore just being his infuriatingly sparkly self. It's hard to argue with a man who twinkles. lol.

Harry sitting there like a dummy going 'what do I normally wank to again? oh, right, HIM.' ...and then Snape at the end just getting all wound up - fetish for powerful wizards much? Well, I suppose he wouldn't be overly interested in anyone who couldn't keep up, after all. He's so wonderfully repressed.

I anxiously await the next installment.

oh! ch. 3 is dedicated to me? That's awesome! I love the mention of starfish oil here. lol. We know how much trouble that got Severus into in my 'Snape's Skivvies' series (trouble of the best kind, but even so). I'm so excited to see how this is going to progress now that Harry is a bratty teenager rather than a little boy. onward to part II!

hah! oh god. Poor Snape. Poor Harry. I don't know who to feel worse for here - Snape for having to suggest Harry wank, or Harry for being just air-headed enough to need Snape to spell it out for him. Awesome. Can't wait to see them getting some action.

The first chapter was really disturbing, and no matter how much Snape denies being a pedophile he most assuredly shouldn't be aroused by a 12 years old KID.

I'm also wondering if the story has been wrongly labeled : it's marked COMPLETE - all chapters submitted - yet it is not, it's said ONESHOT - a story consisting of one chapter - yet has multiple chapters...