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for The favour

by sjansons

schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! oh shit you made me cry in public, it was sweet and bitter and sweet and fantastic!!!! Great work, Love it!!
Take Care
Read you soon

Love
Lola
person jaceni50
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved it! I don't know if it's ended yet since you haven't labled it complete, but it gives nice closure in my opinion. You did answer the questions I had and the ending made it all worth while. You really tricked me there somewhere, but I'm glad to have been mistaken. I hate that it took so long, but at least they got there before they died. :D Loved it.
person kazfeist
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a charming story, and a very welcome addition to the fandom. Welcome, come into the Light. :D
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, both chapters were very bittersweet and full of heartache and regret. I hope you're going to tell us how she ended up becoming Mrs Malfoy after all. I did like to see though, that despite the upheaval there would had to have been, that she and Ron stood proudly at their childrens' sides on their wedding day - Rose and Scorpious - who'd have guessed. LOL I'm totally intrigued now - I want to read some more please. :)
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow......I can feel the emotion just rippling off the page. And it knocked me off balance, to be honest. Just wow! I just....just....anyway, I should stop now cause I in my English class and I need to focus...but...on to the next chapter :)
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the two additional chapters. I wish there was a little of the reaction to there relationship between the 2nd and 3rd chapter just for continuity. However, even without that it's delightful.
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the surprise ending....
person thejojo
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... that was amazing =) you're a brilliant writer and it all fit so well. loved the 'learning sex', its so hermione!! yay!
person jaceni50
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really complex Hermione. I like it. :) There are a lot of things unanswered that I hope to be able to understand when you continue the story. For example, why didn't she like kisses and did she love him before she asked him to be her first? Can't wait for the next update. :)
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well of course the favour has to be returned. :) It had quite a sad touch to it though, so I wonder if they're going to help each other through such troubled times????