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person Liz
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are an evil, evil writer, my lovely Ms_Figg ;-)
Pleeeeaaaase more!
It's so awesome. I love when she tells him what to do and how to do it.
So hot.
Well, sometimes a change just clears your mind. And it's definitely something different.
Can't wait to see Severus out of his pj's.
person Janeplay
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter (7) kind of made me lol, but at the same time want to find a man who'd be that turned on by me! Very nicely done and well written. I like the way Hermione is leading him on step by step. It feels very revealing, seeing the story unfold like this.

It might have been short, but it sure was sweet!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that is one image that's going to on a loop in my head for a while! Thanks.
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn it. Now my whole mirror scen that I just sent to my beta is going to pale in comparsion. This Severus is so cute. Please keep posting.
person DJ
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this story is flowing. Keep up the great work.
person Tenar10r
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Another cliffie!
person Amy
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next chapter! YAY!
person b
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
soooo cool.
I love your approach. I love Severus in his nervousness and Hermione trying to make him comfortable.
I dare say, everyone's been in Severus' place someday (or will be) with more or less time to think and get nervous about all that.
And so I feel with both of them.
And Hermione giving him the money is such a super idea.
I guess this will have Severus see that she's really into things and not just pretending.
Great story.
person magalena
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, she's going to pay him for her fantasy. I like her turn about on him here.
She wants you, quit being a wimp and just shag her Sev!!!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Granger...Can't wait to see how she turns this around on Snape.