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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure this is cut for a one shot? This could be a great story, do not have to be long just a little longer.. LOL
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Kind of interesting to get Lucius' viewpoint, & his, umm, urgent need to consult with Narcissa afterward.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brava!! A job very well done. It was fun and funny to pity Lucius' place in it all. lol But, the way you wrote it was fabulous. I was able to get the love in the middle of the lust and Lucius' angst. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Lucius. Great fic!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Loved it!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cute!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was sweet :)
I love the idea of Lucius trapped in a chair, unable to leave while his son gets it on! Hee.
I love the idea of Lucius trapped in a chair, unable to leave while his son gets it on! Hee.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome one-shot! I loved it. Unless there is more?!! Narcissa's reaction?
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite simply - I LOVED IT!!! :) How embarassing if they ever find out Lucius was there watching them. LOL
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!!! It's fantastic!