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March 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Great oneshot
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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely story! :) Thanks for sharing and I didn't think it was the least bit 'creep' in any way! :)
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That was sweet. And not too pervy, lol!
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome, just love your stories hope to see more soon :)
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December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and sexy. I liked the ending. Although, being a naughty reader, I would have enjoyed Lucius's discovery that they knew all along that he was hiding and that they quited enjoyed performing for him.
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was delightful. Lucius' little panic attack had me giggling for sure! Now that I've read both Potter fics, I'm going to go and explore your orginal works! Consider me a fan!
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was just charming! I did read your chapter ficlets over at your LJ, and loved them all. Didn't yet leave a comment, as I wanted to read them over again. :D
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Lucius' reactions were perfect and the Draco/Hermione was very touching.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe its the inherent story-teller in me, but good one-shots tend to leave me wanting more, and this is a good one-shot. Good one-shots, in my opinion, make for good story-openers. I can see a couple ways of going about this story. You could leave it from Lucius's POV. You could move it to Narcissa's POV. Or maybe even Harry or Ron's POV when they find out that Hermione is engaged to Draco (assuming they didn't know they were already together).
Overall, I think this was very good. Its whetted my appetite for more and I hope you write more. :)
Overall, I think this was very good. Its whetted my appetite for more and I hope you write more. :)
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* This story is incredibly witty, well-written, and a great laugh. I really love the endearing ending, as well. Well done!