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Great story so far, hope you update soon. Would it possible to get an email when you do? My email is digiron91@hotmail.com.

If there is no dark lord why wouldn't he live with his godfather?

I wouldn't use the word 'detached' to describe your writing. More like it's 'straight forward'. You seem focused on moving the plot onward and giving the minimum amount of information in order to do so. I don't think that's a bad thing. Sometimes a lack of info (especially if it doesn't help the story) is necessary. Though I guess I would like to see how Harry handles this major shift in his reality once the werewolf (hormone?) wears off. I mean, nothing for him will ever be the same. And if he's the same Harry we all know and love, he's not going to take that very well ;)

So far, I like this. Thank you for your explanation paragraph at the end of chapter two. Reading that lets me know what I can expect from this world Harry inhabits. I was already slightly confused by Fenrir. He seemed far too nice and I was going to ask if you were writing him OOC (out of character). Not that I mind that or anything. I just like to know that's what I'm getting into so I don't judge the story based on that criteria. I just never think of Fenrir as regretting biting ANYONE. He's so proud to be a werewolf and enjoys ravaging others. A world without Voldermort would change many things. So yeah, I'm liking this so keep up the good work :)

Loved as it is :D

No toning down, this was an excellent chapter!!! Great work here :D

Brilliant chapter can't wait to read more hope you continue

I like it so far-- Can't wait for the next chapter!!

ooooo interesting i look forward to what happens next please update soon

Brilliant story would love to read more

Very nice beginning!!! Can't wait for more!