rate_review Reviews

What do we think? I think that it's a really good story, only it needs two things to make it better... though, whether you decide to change anything, I still would enjoy reading this story ^_^... First I think you should get a beta or a proofreader(which is almost the same as a beta *chuckles*)not just for misspells, and the likes but also to space out sentences and paragraphs in a more readable way, and not have then to much as a block. Second, can you please try making the chapters a bit longer *pouts* "Please"

Please update chapter 3 soon ^_^

Jan

PS: Could you please email me when you next update? Please *puppy eyes*
naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

Keep going :)

Please continue, but only if you will include Nightcrawler at some point. X-Men always feels like it's missing something when he dosen't at least get a cameo. I think this is the first Potter/X-Men crosover I've seen and I'm interested as to where you will take the ideal. For ease of reading, though, I hope you sort out whatever formating issue that came up to make chp. 1 and 2 look so difrent, and I noticed a few little typos.

It would be good to see more.