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I hated it, instead of seeming empowered or in charge, Hermione was a cum basket looking desperately for good sex and blah blah blah. I know you're a Charlie fan but this was just yuckie. She did everything with a penis and was too afraid to talk to Malfoy but not to be a slag? How unHermione is that? Ron, Harry and the others? Do you think anyone would be fine with that or would want to be the one she picks whe she is so slutty? Draco was even more pathetic waiting and being her back up. I'd hate to see the bookshelves and favorites of anyone who commended this story. I'm not smashing all of your writing, just this fic because I think it needs some serious evaluation. Anyone reading this as their first of your stories would be dissuaded from reading your others because it was so poorly planned. In my opinion that would be a shame. I hope you take this as honest feed back because I have never been of the opinion that reviews should only be for hate mail or pure praise but honest commentary.

awesome story! Loved it! Hot and with TWO wizards, not just one ;)

Boo for Charlie and yah for Draco. I'm glad they're together now. Though I wonder if Charlie was trying reverse psychology on her...

You're back!!!!!!!!!!!! You're back you're back you're back you're back you're back>>>>>>>> I absolutely adore this chapter. It could very well stand completely on its own as a oneshot. But I rather desperately want it to continue. You write the most thrilling and tantalising things. Absolutely, unforgivably gorgeous. Thank you. You made my day.

~Mia

That was bloody brilliant!! Loved it!! I'm not sure (perhaps I haven't read carefully enough... but is this a one-shot or are you going to continue with their relationship (maybe make Charlie jealous??). Thanks!! All the best!

I can see why this'll be short and sweet, but that's ok. Sometimes the long wait between updates for a longer story make it difficult for me to get back into the swing of the story. Thanks for this one! (I like Mrs. Malfoy, too. :D)

WOW.....Charlie put her in her place.........good thing!! Glad to see Draco took the high road....even if he had decided to do other wise. REALLY GOOD story!!

Excellent writing as usual! I love the plot. Great overall story. I always enjoy your stories and this was no exception. Thanks and I hope to read more of your work soon.

That was so bittersweet. Loved it. And you could see straight away that Hermione was searching for far more than just great sex - she wanted the whole package and who could blame her for that?