rate_review Reviews

Ok, first off, let me congratulate you.
You just put up three chapters in...I believe, a day?
Brilliant. :]
And now...it seems like Hermione is in a pickle.
Tsk, damn.
I hope Draco gets his ignorant head outta his arse
& finds out all about Hermione.
Because that nightmare he had might come true again.
Stupid Draco.
And stupid Hermione too, for not telling him anything about the stalker.
I do approve her getting out of that apartment though,
kudos for you for that idea.
I'd love her leaving and then Draco being miserable as hell without her.
I love Ginny up at this point;
she's so sly.

Please update soon dear!!!
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I totally love this story. I want to smack Draco right now, but that just means I'm getting emotionally invested in the characters!!! Now...if aff.net could just get an alert system!

Can't wait for more, as usual.
Update soon please!
love, trix.

Well that was bloody fantastic!!!!! I cant really say much more then that! WHOSE THE STALKER?????? I must know??? Update soon please!
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Okay...Draco needs to find out about how she's being harassed already.

So, I just sat down and read all of this, and I have one very important thing to say to you. Are you listening? Good, here it is:

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE.

I am so suddenly and unreasonably addicted to this, it's kind of ridiculous. But, there it is. You'll just have to learn to live with my unwavering passion.

Well done, chickadee!

PS: DEAR GOD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE REST.

I like how the stalker subplot first appeared in an off-hand manner, and continues to be secondary to the Draco/Hermione relationship troubles but is gradually becoming more prominent. How will they mesh? Fun fun fun :)

I love this story, but I have to say the last few chapters (12-14) were a bit confusing. The start of chapter 12 is a bit jarring compared to where the reader was left in chapter 11, and it was the same with the chapter 14 beginning. At the end of 13 Draco was going to knock on her door, did he not do it, or did she simply not here him? Anyway, I'm dying to see where this goes. He really should find out about the stalker soon though. Can't wait for a new update, and soon please!

I like the overall storyline, but I think the background needs a little retooling. If they're both so successful and can easily afford it, the natural reaction to a blowout of this size would be for one of them to move out. The pensieve memory of the kiss and the nightmare are both nice touches.
I hope there's a more thorough explanation at some point of why Draco never picked up on Hermione's wilder side. (She subconsciously didn't want him to, he wasn't paying enough attention, etc.)

Update soon, please!