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March 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of them meeting when Hermione is so young, and Lucius deciding to mentor her based on her power. I know it's been a long time since the story was updated, but I'd love to see it continued.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story! The dynamic personalities and possibilities is fantastic. I'm finding the everchanging moods and plots of lucius malfoy facintating. please continue... The twist with the wands is interesting... is the partner wand Lucius'?
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The flap of a butterfly wing ;) I'm really enjoying your tale, Lucius is written as the great plotter and manipulator he sure can be and I do like that you named his alias after one of Odin's ravens. Am I correct in guessing that Lucius will have succeeded in turning Hermione into a Slytherin? She has quite a few of those talents in the books IMHO so with a bit of tutoring...
The wand, Lucius has the match I presume? And Ollivander realised well that telling McGonagall...
Looking forward to your next chapter!
The wand, Lucius has the match I presume? And Ollivander realised well that telling McGonagall...
Looking forward to your next chapter!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very intriguing and promising! Please write more!
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had been afraid that you had abandoned this story; I am very glad to see it continued, and with such an intriguing set of circumstances! more, please!
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this is so lovely so far.
i am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
gotta love a good lucius.
i am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
gotta love a good lucius.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is incredible, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! The way you describe Lucius and his attitude toward Hermione is very believable. I hope you post again soon, I look forward to it.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not quite sure where you are going with this story, but I love that! Each chapter was well written and I am very much waiting on tenderhooks for further updates!
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing! You've got me hooked.
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story but did you repost? there are no new chapters.