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I so love Veela fics and this one already has me hooked. I look forward to future chapters.

Very cute. I enjoy the idea that the two of them being together is a shock to EVERYONE but Dumbldore

I love this story! I can't wait to see Harry and Ron's reactions to her being pregnant if they are so astonished she is even with Draco. Looking forward to more. Great job! :)

I can barely contain myself with excitement - can't wai to read the next chapter! :D

I cannot wait for the talk with her mates...er, friends ;)

I eagerly await more

This story is really good!!! Great Reaction with Hermione. And just an idea, Hermione could get back at Draco and totally surprise him by saying that it is impossible for her to be pregnant because she is on the muggle birth control pill. Then Draco would of course go totally nuts and be angry and Hermione would be able to fight back and everything could just keep splendidly going from there. :)

I love it! Really I do and I want to see what comes next!

I love veela stories! This is wonderful. I can't believe Draco dropping all that on her... Mates and babies.. wow.

ohhh, Draco's in HUGE trouble, give him hell, make him suffer a bit, you know what be hilarious - if only they had an argument in the hall and he shouts out she's knocked up.
The second chapter is great, though you should really concentrate in making the charactors speeches abit authentic (i.e. hesitation, fillers, and pauses)would give an element of realism in the speech, beacuase really noone in reality and in fiction would give a speech like draco did about why he manupilated hermione fluently, unless the charactors where in a situation where fluency were required (i.e. hermione's long ass answers in class or the minister of magic giving a political speech). But overall sweety it was great! :D