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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you hit it just right with Ron, I think. Selfish and impulsive, right down the line. For a guy who is supposedly such a great strategist, he really doesn't think very far ahead of opening his mouth before he speaks. Harry at least is more temperate, at least now that he's got Voldie out of his head. I like your characters, and the way each has their own voice in your fic. Good dialogue, too--that's hard to do.
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You leave me at that. That is just cruel update very soon please I must know what happens next......
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG
you did the whole fight scene perfectly
im suprised draco didnt run after hermione but im sure he'll show up
KEEP IT UP!!!
you did the whole fight scene perfectly
im suprised draco didnt run after hermione but im sure he'll show up
KEEP IT UP!!!
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and all I can say is wow!!You got Ron in one.Can't wait for more.
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was simply brilliant!
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SOO AMAZING
im soo anxious to see how ron and harry will react
update soon please <3
im soo anxious to see how ron and harry will react
update soon please <3
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The reactions on the great hall were simply priceless!
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I don't think that you're going fast because of the way the story started, so it seems consistant to me. If it were not a veela thing then it would be a different story, but since it is it seems a natural progression. Loved how Hermione is accepting but conflicted as well. Hopefully you'll write a little more of what is the reaction of everyone else in the story. A little longer chapters would be nice. Well, can't wait for the next update. :)
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it felt so good..i adore draco..and him being a possessive lover...drives me crazy..and the way to described him..wow!!!!..thank u for writing this..will u continue this fic..
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it felt so good..i adore draco..and him being a possessive lover...drives me crazy..and the way to described him..wow!!!!..thank u for writing this..will u continue this fic..