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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, but I'm still mad at Draco for getting Hermione pregnant. She has enough adjustments to make as it is and their first time may as well have had a date rape drug involved, so I feel he took major advantage of her and I'm surprised she's not putting up more of a fight because of it. The least he could have done was used protection. I hope Hermione figures out a way to block those pheremones. I would think Draco would want to be loved for himself and not the pheremones. I hope the next time Draco uses those pheremones that Hermione hexes him. I guess I just want a feistier Hermione. At least give the parents some hell!
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Normally I hate first person povs but this story for some reason sucks me in! Hope to see more.
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He is so cute. Your descriptions of emotions are simply facinating. So what is next.......... whoa yeah Lucius....... Please do not make us wait to long..........
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your story is one of my favorites I'm following it also on fanfiction too.. I hope to see an update soon :D
Cheers!
Cheers!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do love a possessive yet considerate mate. Your update made me very happy--so many veela fics end up abandoned; I really hope that doesn't happen with this one, it's too good to let languish in the archive. And just so you know, this story is one of the very few reasons that I even check the Draco-Hermione category. Normally I ship Lucius or Severus and Hermione (I like Rickman and Isaacs, what can I say?) but your story keeps bringing me back!
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!! update soon!!!!!!!
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
first i would like you to now that i signed just to review your story. i like most of it.
my problem is with the way you wrote ron. i understand he sad some very hurt full thinks. and i understand that hermoine should be mad. hermoine said some very hurt full thinks back, and she does not seem to care.
hermonie punch ron, so are you telling me that becouse some one said somethink hurtfull to you it is ok to hit them.
ginny did a spell on ron that was so bad he was in the hostpital, so i can nealy kill someone for saying hurtthinks.
please understand me this is your story, and you can write it anyway you want but show vilence to other peopel for a moment of anger, and that is ok is not right.
i will gave you some ideas, if any of them are good, please use them if not throw them away.
the crice ginny use put ron in hostipla but he had a bad reaction and nealy dies, (nice to show some real conserqion for violence)
hermoine even thought she is mad, goes to the hosptial to talk to ron, ron lives, but is drug and talk tell her he is sorry, that he is in love with her, and that it hurt that the person that he had to defened her from is her mate.
ron and hermoine go back to being best firned, and he the godfather of her son, ron relize he not in love with hemoine any more and just want to protect her, ginny get taked to prison and showed that if ron would have died she would be there for 20 years, she said sorry, and never you spell on people again,
i like your story, just i like ron, and i hate vionlence with no repercutions.
good story good luck
my problem is with the way you wrote ron. i understand he sad some very hurt full thinks. and i understand that hermoine should be mad. hermoine said some very hurt full thinks back, and she does not seem to care.
hermonie punch ron, so are you telling me that becouse some one said somethink hurtfull to you it is ok to hit them.
ginny did a spell on ron that was so bad he was in the hostpital, so i can nealy kill someone for saying hurtthinks.
please understand me this is your story, and you can write it anyway you want but show vilence to other peopel for a moment of anger, and that is ok is not right.
i will gave you some ideas, if any of them are good, please use them if not throw them away.
the crice ginny use put ron in hostipla but he had a bad reaction and nealy dies, (nice to show some real conserqion for violence)
hermoine even thought she is mad, goes to the hosptial to talk to ron, ron lives, but is drug and talk tell her he is sorry, that he is in love with her, and that it hurt that the person that he had to defened her from is her mate.
ron and hermoine go back to being best firned, and he the godfather of her son, ron relize he not in love with hemoine any more and just want to protect her, ginny get taked to prison and showed that if ron would have died she would be there for 20 years, she said sorry, and never you spell on people again,
i like your story, just i like ron, and i hate vionlence with no repercutions.
good story good luck
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I simply love it....... For course more smut never damages the imagination.. LOL
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February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A lovely read, so far! Thank you.
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH wow that was agreat chap and exactly how i thought it would happen but better.... i thought the fight between ron and hermione was great and you wrote it soooo well.... and i love that harry is still supporting her... i thought it was funny when he told ron good luck and scooted away from him that was funny... i loved that hermione was able to calm draco down and i sooo love veela fics esp for the protective/possessive side of the veelas....