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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person KadyRae
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, again.. :)

Cant wait for the next chapter :)
person KadyRae
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually, question.... Snape does realize the extent of Harry and Draco's relationship right?
And he doesnt have a problem with it at all?
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ya know... I started reading this story probably a half dozen times, but, for some reason, just could NOT get into it. But now that I've read up to chapter 18, I've gotten REALLY into it. This is a GREAT story! I can't wait to read the rest! Good job!
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 43!!! I'm sooo proud of Severus and Harry!!!
person Sarah
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really liked how this chapter came out... it was also really touching seeing snape like this... keep up the good work!
person SP777
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #42....

1. *looks at Harry* O' Clueless One, thou ignorance knowest no
boundaries. O_o

*takes stick and whacks Harry upside the head...then hits authoress
for good measure*

But, at least he is getting the jest of it, once he takes the TIME to stop
and THINK about it.

2. That was quite a turnaround for Weasley, I didn't think he was capable
of clarity when it came to Slytherins.

3. By the way, it amazes me how this story has hit 400+, what are you getting
10 reviewers a piece? Is it big at FF also or are you not posting over
there?
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda sweet to see snape so possessive. update soon please!
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 42!!!
person MewMew2
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
His sight was so furry without his glasses ' - when I read this line, I had an odd (but hilarious) picture of Harry with a furry animal on his face sitting on him. The thought briefly crossed m;y mind that perhaps Serverus had a cat (he seems like a cat owning man). Thank you for updating once more, as always you've done an excellent job.

Critique:

His sight was so furry without his glasses - this sentence could be replaced with a more grammatically smooth sentence: 'his sight was so fuzzy without his glasses'

Thanks again
person k lave demo
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks. it kind of made sense they wouldn't since problems are rarely eradicated quickly especially if it's a drastic change. so it made sense to me. and yeah i understand the different parenting methods. even in the same family where there are siblings parents can use different parenting techniques which can be very irritating. especially if they take favorites or become less or more strict with younger siblings and vice versa. absolutely loved ur fatherly snape and how harry is starting to get it. i have to say harry really is probably the most complicated character with the way he sees and interprets things. there should be a guide on how harry views the world. anyways til next time. viva la vida!