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about #47....

1. The world is worth saving, because The world was individuals..
-This is kind of hard for me to explain, but...for one brief second, you
made me realize that the world is more than nameless faces, people you
just pass by on the street. There are people who laugh, cry, fret, rage,
act stupid, act silly, SAY stupid things, keep to themselves, feel inadequate, ...etc. People who will have differences than you either for good or ill
or what-not...

BUT, for that one brief second, if someone asked to save the world, I would
say....yes.

Kind of gives me a clue on how Jesus felt and I apologize in advance if your
religious beliefs are different and I offend you.

2. okay....NOW, does everyone find out about Harry & Severus???

I love how you made Voldemort so insignificant, and finished him off so quickly. Please give me more soon. I have been following since chapter one was uploaded months ago, but been unable to say anything. I guess it's not until something is nearly over that you realize what it meant to you.. Thank you for the most amazing story I have ever read. I would have loved this to have been the last hp-book! More soon, please! Though I really don't want it to be over, I NEED to read more. Soon.

That was perfect and beautiful and so incredibly graceful. Your words were just the perfectly seasoned, exactly balanced something that was required. As you can tell, I'm not as good with words as you are. I truly enjoyed it all. But especially this chapter. I loved Draco's swiftness and skill. I lovved Dumbledore's sorrow and triumph. I loved Fawke's unexpected gift. I loved Harry's smile about James and the instinctual usage of the same magic his mother possessed. But I most loved the scene with the Snapes as Severus asked him to show him his son's true face and then to hide it during battle. I could go on for ages. Suffice it to say, I was awed by this chapter and I thank you for it.

~Mia

Quick and painless. A nice end

Oh, poor Harry!

That is quite a shock. A less-than-saintly mother and Snape for a father. I imagine that will make Potions lessons ever more painful.

Great start!

What a bleak outlook for the start of the year!

Makes me want to hug Harry a lot...

Great chapter!

So. I got a little bit teary eyed because I thought that this was the last chapter, but then I read your review and I am unbelievably happy that you aren't going to end it right there. I mean, I know that there can't be that many chapters after this one but it still makes me feel better, and frankly I am fighting a rather nasty cold right now so anything that makes me feel even a little bit better I am more than excited about. Anyways, I have to say that I loved this chapter and I am really glad that you didn't go crazy and over do it, I have read some authors that do. I loved the battle, and I loved the end of Dumbledore (I am really glad that it didn't turn out to be him stabbing Harry in the back!) and I really enjoyed the scene of Draco and Blaise. I am glad that even (some) Slytherins know that real power needs friends and loved one to support it. It was all very classy and wll done. Great job, looking forward to more! ~K

Ah haa!

Snape is getting interested. Finally he aknowledges that Harry is not completely talent-free.

All those secrets are hard on Harry.

Great job!!

Oh I won't actually be disappointed with a lack of sex. (I just naturally assume all stories go that way eventually in here as the usually do in like 90% of the crap posted on here. lol) This story is so amazingly awesome and fully developed that it doesn't need a crutch like smut to make it readable.

Also, Harry defeated Voldemorte WITH LOVE. Holy shit! Even Rowling wasn't able to pull that off as well as you did. Serious fucking props, man. He killed him with love and it wasn't stupid, corny or cheesy. I am fully impressed.

Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see how you end this.

I like how snape took on that father mode at the end update soon please