rate_review Reviews

aww poor harry.

My..my, I must admit I was surprised you are attempting to
do a 'Severitus', wish I knew where that word came from.

I had wanted to ask you would you ever attempt one, BUT it's
been done before in the past and I thought you wouldn't waste
your time. Shows what I know...

NOW, so far this was a GREAT start, talk about being punched in
the gut AND falling down stairs! I just wish you had Harry be a tad
bit reasonable and NOT be so hasty in tearing that letter, but that
just won't work for you in this drama, right?
;-)

But, STILL everybody has a right to know that they have a child they never
knew about, now whether or not they take action to get to know the
child will be their decision.

Anyway, once again, I'll sit back and enjoy the ride.

i like the first chap. when is the next getting posted?

wow... that's sad. i have a feeling he may have judged Severus a bit unfairly. at the least he shouldn't have torn the letter to him. it could have made his situation a whole lot better. as usual i love your original plot to an overworked idea. hoping this gets better before it gets worse. (doubt it though). til next time. viva la vida!

Can't wait for an update! I hope Harry tells Snape eventually. Like where the story is going. Keep up the great work!