rate_review Reviews

you're welcome! I do wonder what harry saw.

been waitin for this all afternoon. i'm honestly curious about the "white dementors" (for lack of a better name). i don't think they're visions from moldie voldie. i am more inclined to believe that it's harry's stress with his role in the war, snape (in general) and his own weariness that are influencing this. but i may be wrong. i wonder how long it'll take draco to realize, what i believe, to be the beginnings of attraction inspired by Harry's "protection" of him? unlike Their Pheonix i can't wait to see how you'll end this. the anticipation is eating me alive. i'm having so much fun reading this. many thanks and til next time. viva la vida!

about #5...

Sooo...ARE you saying there IS a new enemy out there..or is Harry
becoming delusional? O_o

Please please update again soon.

oooo...dementors...how deliciously wicked. Can't wait for more!

about #4...

"to praise this shining example of student malfeasance"

Malfeasance...*sigh* that's what I love about you. You bring up
damn words that have NO place in my vocabulary. ^__^

All in all, some leeway was made, at least on Prof. Snape's part.
It'll be interesting to see how he goes about defeating the rock
that is Harry Potter.

Still a good story! Glad to see you're still writing it. So many writers start stories and then never update and that's just mean. :)

I soooo need chapter 5!!! Tell me Harry is wrong?

Snape's a nasty bugger here. He seems to be a very unpleasant person.
I'd like to know if you will reveal the secret to him at an early time in the story, so that they have to come to terms with it? Or will it be the grest revelation at the end?
But of course I understand if you can't reveal this right now.

I really like both the premise and the tone for this story, excellent job so far. The only thing to break the mood was this line in chapter 4 "Severus leaned back in his chair and almost hissed the words,