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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person tiggator
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great little duel between Snape and Harry. :) Keep up the great work! This story just keeps getting better and better each time a new chapter is created. You definitely have a gift. :)
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! Four stars!! ^^
person Mia
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beyond brilliant. I love that your stories have such a fantastic plot and are not just instaporn. You never dive in for the kill of tittillation, you put the most exciting stories first.
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Draco and his observation skills. ^^ Definitely interested in seeing what those Dementors were (if they weren't only conjured by Harry's connection of Voldemort). Really liked the description of Harry's patronus' reaction to the situation. That made me laugh.
person paigeey07
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn you! *shakes finger at you*

:)
person k lave demo
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hai i know. but i wanted to put it out there. i'm getting tired of sev's and dray's preconceptions marring the real picture that is harry or only revealing the parts of him that they're willing to see. i'm curious are you planning on having sev's manipulations backfire a little bit. cause if begins to act like he's softening towards harry on purpose i can't help but think those acts will become more genuine. i agree i don't see draco falling for harry anytime soon... hmm....well til next time. viva la vida!
person js
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're making me like Snape. I mean really like him.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape changed but not so much. He's still a snarky person but at least he's starting to actually think about the other person. I think that a story is more believable if you don't change the characters personality so much. So thank you for that.
I'm afraid for Draco. I'm wondering how far he is going to go. I understand that his parents are in danger but I don't want him to be ruined because of it.
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder in what way Snape will change his approach to teaching or interacting with Harry.

Keep up the good work!
person akinohanun
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please update this story its really good and its killing me that i have to wait for another chapter..