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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person Mia
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kind of love that neither Draco or Harry is nursing a hidden longing for the other. Slight obsession,yes. But you haven't made it out to be some twisted, unrequited love thing. Your words are beautiful. Thank you for them.

~Mia
person MewMew2
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for my daily dosage of suspense! Post again when you can please.
person paigeey07
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know what? I honestly forgot what I was shaking my finger for. Crap, lol. Ooh harry got caught, haha.
person k lave demo
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the "bloody father" comment seems a bit ironic.:D mmm not sure what to say this time. i am glad that things seem to be smoothing themselves out. for now. (best not to take anything for granted with your stories.) ... well til next time. viva la vida!
person SP777
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

You know, as I was reading the beginning of the chapter, it just occured
to me that you fulfilled a 'fantasy' chapter, I guess, of mine from the
last chapter.

It dealt with having Snape dueling the other students the way a REAL
Death Eater would to show them how to defend themselves properly,
except you did that with Harry in the past chapter to an extent.

Would you ACTUALLY do something like in the future? Have Snape show
the students how to really duel?

By the way, when will you reveal what is happening with Harry???

...when will Severus get the shock of his life?

A simple mention of how many chapters will satisfy me. :-)
person Traybell
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Love Harry in this and Snape's way of thinking( he's so proud and set in his ways, I can't wait until he has to put his foot in his mouth. The plot is great, I understand Harry's reluctance where Snape is concerned. Thanx for sharing.:0)
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit surprised at Harry for not realizing what Snape was doing, but I guess Harry could have assumed Snape too angry at Harry's insinuations to be mad at anyone else in the class who made those surprised outbursts. Harry's definitely more mistrusting in this one, though not as obsessed with Draco. Though I'm guessing he's still partially scared that Draco might have noticed something that night.
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!!
person SP777
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6....

Now, THAT'S what I'm talking about...reverse psychology at
its best! Oh, and I guess the duel was a'ight, too. :-)

I have to say, I've always liked the character of Prof. Snape,
of course, Alan Rickman gives the character justice with the
way he brings him to life on screen.

YOU, on the other hand, seem to be one of the few authors who has learned
to get into the character's head and make him believably snarky, condescending,
AND proud.

Plus, any story that deals with Prof. Snape & Harry at odds, but come to
some type of understanding as time passes is alright with me!

But, I get the feeling Harry better watch it, since Snape is a true Occlumens.

..and with that, I end this.
person MewMew2
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cheers to indirect father-son bonding duel! Keep up the good work!