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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the end here with Snape being surprised over Harry's actions, or lack of action in some cases. I really am looking forward to Draco though and his point of view in the future from this. Great chapter.
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like, so far!! Really, really good!!
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I won't remember, lol. Thanks though. And greatt chapter btw. :)
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I look forward to your updates, this was a great chapter. Poor Draco.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and so let the tentative not-so-much-an alliance begin. i'm assuming this is the start of how draco and harry begin noticing things about each other. and thank you severus has finally got the next piece of the puzzle. i'm assuming he'll figure this part out faster since his preconceptions of harry are getting in the way less than before. do you have a set length yet or you still workin on it. by the way is this pre-slashi or is an actual relationship goin to develop.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this so far it's a nice twist. I like following Snape he's complex.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
#8...
This felt SO much like a turning point in the story that it isn't
even funny. I take it things are going to escalate soon with a
surprise or two? :-)
You know, what I, also, find funny? In the beginning of the story,
you wrote it in such a way that I felt Draco really wasn't needed
in this one. The dynamics between Severus & Harry more than made
up for a needed third party to this story.
Do you ever read your own stories sometimes, just for fun or to
get an 'outsiders' feel from it?
This felt SO much like a turning point in the story that it isn't
even funny. I take it things are going to escalate soon with a
surprise or two? :-)
You know, what I, also, find funny? In the beginning of the story,
you wrote it in such a way that I felt Draco really wasn't needed
in this one. The dynamics between Severus & Harry more than made
up for a needed third party to this story.
Do you ever read your own stories sometimes, just for fun or to
get an 'outsiders' feel from it?
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape starting to see the potential in Harry albiet begrudginly. interested to see what Harry will do about the Draco situation.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is progressing really well. I've read stories on this site that just seem to jump into things and go so fast with a story that my head spins and while I would love for Snape to find out in the next chapter that he is Harry's dad, only because I am anxious for his reaction, I know that a lot has to happen between the two of them for that to happen. Keep the chapters coming!