rate_review Reviews

Yay! The next chapter has the potential to reveal Harry's big secret to Severus! :)

Intersting chapters, had to catch up!

Severus's thought at the end is ironic gold. Its going to be fun when he figures it out.
I like the way you get inside their heads, it makes the story more interesting when we see
what motivation the characters have.
excellent chapter

So much for the Glamor. Harry must be paranoid, although I'd liken it to when you get a zit on your face and, while it might not actually be that big, it looks to you like it takes up half the room. Harry must look more like Lily than he thought if all he could see is the Snape in him.

Keep up the great work!

Oh look!

Number 100 in tha' house!!!

Sorry HAD to do that. ^_^

about #9...

Okay, seriously though...

1. I think Harry, in the beginning of the chapter, is being a bit
childish for a teenager in his way of thinking when it comes to
his parents. It's one thing to know how Severus hated James for
obvious reasons, BUT Harry doesn't have enough evidence to know
HOW Severus felt about Lilly.

Besides didn't Lilly reveal what she KNEW about Severus in the beginning?

2. The next instant, he was flying through the hair

-okay, I have to admit THAT one gave me pause. It's towards the
end of the chapter.

By the way, LOVED the imagery of Voldermort eating Harry, I KNEW
there was a hidden sadist in you waiting to come out. :-)


PS-you are really excelling at writing duels now, so what about those sex scenes? :-)
PPS-by the way, your old style of writing is JUST fine.

well at least harry was honest with draco. I hope he was honest because looking at the title.. I can't tell what he says to be the truth or a lie, lol. ;)

Snape thinks its because Harry still wants to look like James but really it's because Harry doesn't want to look like Snape. Lol. That is so ironic. I can't wait for everything to blow up in his face. I think that he deserves it. I mean he does have some good side to him but I think this will an excellent learning experience for him. He has never tried to be fair to anybody other than his snakes. If he wanted things to change then it should have started w/ him but instead he feed into onto the problem.

cheers for hermione. i get so tired of people calling harry stupid. he's reckless not stupid. i do believe the reasons he doesn't apply himself is obviously 1) he's been convinced that he is stupid by relatives and others and 2) he's too preoccupied by defeating voldemort to realize that he should apply himself to more than just defense. please have snape or someone convince him that he is smart. also your characters often embody a certain belief i hold which is the easiest person to decieve is oneself. and on that note preconceptions are annoying. oh thanks for the compliment. til next time. Viva la Vida!

You do the delicate balance as perfunctorily as any seasoned ballet artiste. I love the complexity and the hint of a sense of humour. I love that even though Snape broke through his defenses, he did not achieve a huge epiphany. No ahah moment. Beautiful, delicate, intricate balance. Thank you.