rate_review Reviews

Bloodline curse eh? A nice plot device to implement. Thank you for posting once more, I really like the characterization of Madam Pomphrey, she reads as a witch with a little arrogance about her from the readers point of view when reading the books.

Oh my!! Those invisible undefined Dementors have attacked Harry!! :x Its now Draco to the rescue.. (what will our young budding hero do?)

Also, Harry pulled off a smooth manipulation with Snape. Although if Snape just came out and said he looked more like Lily now, I don't think Harry would know what to think. It would defiantly catch him off guard since the only one anyone seems to talk about is his father. Although if Snape does find out that Harry is not only his son but was heavily abused on top of that (think Occulmency lesson gone horribly awry), oh the revenge that will take place! Bwahahahahahaa.

Keep up the great work!

I'm kinda chuckling right now. By this point, whenever either Severus or Draco comes close to discovering the truth about Harry's parentage, the readers sit forward in their seats a little bit, thinking "Yes, yes...come on, see the difference, don't give up...uh-huh, yes... ... GAH!" when he gives up. I'm not complaining - simply amused by my own reaction. Out of curiosity, can you give us a general idea of how long it will stay a secret? At this point, I'd guess that Draco will figure it out before Snape. A couple chapters, a dozen chapters, at the very end of the story?
Thanks so much for writing, and I look forward to seeing the next chapter. :)

Thanks so much for the update!! Please update again soon.

Okay...so they're not dementors, I know that. But...what could they be? Unless it's just his imagination running wild? But if it were that...then why would his face break out like that? Hrmmmm...I think someone's casting some spells on Harry without anyone noticing it...and it most certainly isn't our beloved Snapey-poo. *grins* I do love me some Sevvie.

about #10...

What IS up with the damn Dementors?????!!!!?????

I loved when snape told him he no longer looked like his father. I lol'd so loud. Great chapter!!

Dementors......Thank you for posting once more, please do so again when you have the chance.

i'm so glad you agree. i can't tell you how many fics i've abandoned because they chose to portray him that way or made it so that he was more at fault than severus ever was. do you think harry was physically abused or do you believe it to more mental and emotional? and darn it i want to know what the white dementors are and maybe it's just me but they seem to be appearing the more harry tries to conceal things. severus is frustrating though, he subconciously and somewhat conciously acknowledges that something is different with harry and then he falls back on old assumptions. for a smart man he can be pretty stupid. sigh as always til next time. viva la vida!

Love this chapter, can't wait for Snape to confront Harry about the changes in his features!