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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person k lave demo
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hopefully this review will get through. anyways hallelujah finally a breakthrough, literally. ;) wonder how he'll react now. harry's falling further into a quagmire of deceit. notice the preslash has officially started. mmm.... so what did ron do this time to tick hermione off? and again the stupidity comments about harry are irritating. on the other hand both of them are being deceived so easily. well til next time. viva la vida!
person SP777
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #13...

person rafiq
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that Severus has unlocked his memory, he should also suspect why Harry keeps a glamour on his face. But he can't confront Harry directly. Can't wait to see how you will have him deal with this information. I also like how the Harry/Draco relationship is progressing.
person MewMew2
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the cat is out of the burlap sack. How will Snape take this new development is the question on my mind, as well as how will he react to the knowledge of Harry's lies. Nice job on describing Snape's initial reaction to having the memory surface, it was very well written. Please update once more when you have the opportunity.
person Camille
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Seriously, I do. That was so brilliant!
I'm guessing next chapter will be the chapter Severus realise the truth. I CAN'T WAIT!

Also, you said some chapter ago that you had avoided writing Snape, as you didn't know if you could keep him in character and such. I have to say that you've written the best Snape in character I've ever read in fanfiction, and I've been reading since 2002.

Keep it coming!

Also, I stayed up all night waiting for you to update (it's around five in the morning where I am). Just so you know ;)
person Kylie
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And that's why you're my favourite fanfiction author. Great job and update soon!
person Bree
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I know, it's only been three days since you last updated, but with a story like this, three days feels like three years! I love it so much!
person Libao22
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG! Will he confront Harry in the next chapter???? How soon til he knows??? What will Harry do??? WIll he continue to deny it????? OMG! OMG! OMG! SO MANY QUESTIONS ARE SPINNING IN MY HEAD. UPDATE SOON! HURRY, HURRY!
person Pilly
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not good with english, but I really wanted to review this chapter. I love the way you write them so in-character and how you've built up such a mesmerizing plot! I can't wait to see Snape's reaction, and not to mention Harry's reaction, when the truth comes out! Will Sev help Harry with the white Dementors? Will they stand together on the battlefield? Love each other as father and son? This is such an amazing story, truly captivating!
And sorry for my crappy English; it's my fifth language... Anyway, I love this story and can't wait to read more!
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
<3 (I had a longer review, but my wifi crapped out and I don't feel like retyping it.)

Keep up the great work!