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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE!!! Wow, wonderful chapter. Thoroughly enjoyable, and a wonderful break from my work. I love the way you're building up the relationship between Draco and Harry.
person MewMew2
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! The scene of Draco confronting Harry about his parentage and the scene where he says he will be there if Harry needs him reminded me of 'No one's gonna hurt you' song from Sweeney Todd. There are a lot of actors/actresses in that film who also play characters in the Harry Potter films. *hums the tune to that song* Thank you for posting once more. Now that I think about it, the cinematography used in Sweeney Todd is very similar to how a memory in pensive is shown in the movie adaptation of the books........
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly love this chapter very much. I've read so many Snape is Harry's dad stories, but never in them do I read about how Snape would feel and think in a situation like that. It was done so beautifully, with the changing POVs of Harry and Snape and how realistic Snape was! Gah! You deserve an award of some kind! Thank you!
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I especially like this chapter in particular - I thought both Harry and Snape's reactions were really well done.
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well damn. Every chapter is better than the last.

Keep up the fantastic work. When I'm not so lazy this story will be added to my list of highly recommended. ^^
person fbiy_lover
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are good with cliff-hangers! Kinda makes me love you and hate you at the same time. Keep up the good work.
person darrena
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant!!! He he... Severus found the truth. Can't wait for more :) Great chapter!! I enjoyed Bellatrix's demise.
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Perfect Thanksgiving day treat. I enjoyed the update far more than the turkey!! ...just don't tell my grandmother : ) Please update again soon.
person SParker
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #17...

Wow! Talk about the most intense conversation of the year. O_o

Of course, if it had been me I would have done some yelling &
wand waving, damn the scene I would have caused.

After all, Snape didn't 'see' Lilly in Harry at ALL, when he
had seen Harry 1st year, he only saw James.

So, now Severus has to make some huge decisions on how will
he be involved in Harry's life.

Ah! Such a Wizarding soap opera this is turning out to be, kinda
like Star Wars.
person k lave demo
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Thanksgiving! i think that abyss is the result that he sees enough of his own perceptions of harry being wrong that it keeps him afloat but he hasn't reconstructed the images into a newer perception which keeps him from reaching the othr side. would that be correct? major change in Draco by the way. ...how do you think people would take it if they found out he was snapes son? not too well, probably? hai i feel so ecstatic. drifting on clooud nine. more, more feed my hungry plot dragon. he enjoys well written fanfics. sigh euphoria shall last til next time. viva la vida... haiii...