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Thanks! *realizes she's not logged in* Eh. Anyways, thank you once more for this wonderful update, I love the further emergence of Draco's selfish/possessive tendencies. I think it is important to keep in mind that the characters of the fandom (unless Post Hogwarts or AU) are adolescents, and adolescence is a time of selfish indulgence, self fulfilling prophecies, and the belief that your petty issues deserve your full attention no matter how stupid they may be. Thank you for really incorporating those feelings into the story. Excellent job!!!!

Goddamn stupid wifi. My review didn't go through again?? >:0


Anyway, I can not help but stress with each (attempted) review how much I love this story and look forward to its updates. Every chapter is perfection. Your characters are so fleshed out it hurts to read (especially when the characters I identify with are in pain.)

Keep up the great work.

I love this story so much

I actually think this is the first aff.net story I have ever commented on.

Please continue.

*anticipates*

<3

Keep up the great work!

You're brilliant, as is this story. Can't wait to read more!

OMG I loved this Ch. It was really good. And poor Draco but I think that it was a really good way for him an harry to get close. Ones again I loved it!

I love your stories. Or most of them. But the writing in all of them that I have managed to glutinously devour so far has been highly held and gracefully managed. If your chapters in this story were food, I am afraid that I would have table manners that would put even the worst fannon fics of Ron's eating to shame. I only wish for more more more of this story. It is like the finest wine that one could never get drunk on. But easily become hopelessly pulled to.

~Mia

talk about a left-fielder. did not see that coming and man i feel bad for draco. no one deserves to see that. it seems severus is slowly crossing from denial to acceptance... i really liked how you had harry respond and protect draco. it really threw severus off. if draco and harry hadn't started changing towards each other do you think harry still would have protected him or at least helped him? i'm inclined to think he would at least help but most people would disagree... still yes an update! happy. happy. if you decide to write a book let me know. would love to read it and edit. good at editing. though it doesn't seem that you need it... well til next time. viva la vida! happy *hums cause she can't whistle"

about #18.....

First reaction...Wow! O_o

What situation inspired THAT scene??? But, it's good to see
stuff like that in stories, keeps your audience guessing
when you decide to do the unexpected. You ought to do it more.

By the way, does anybody beta your stories? Just curious....

Nice job with the floating head scene. Definitely going to be seeing that in my head later this evening! As for the HP comparison to Sweeny Todd, I had Johnny Deep on the brain that day so....Thank you for posting once more, are you now allowed to post your replies on the cite again? How exciting! On a different not, you've done an excellent job in Snape's characterization and his slow movements toward 'bridge building' if you will with Harry. EXcellent JOB!!

P.S. yes, I am now a member of this cite. Unfortunately, MewMew2 had too few characters for them so..........