rate_review Reviews

I like the fact that Snape has an almost endearment for Harry, at least that's what "little fool" seemed like to me. I can't wait to see Snape finding out about the Horcrux. I imagine he'll be a wee bit annoyed at Dumbledore.

The last chapter (20) is depressing. I don't know if I should strangle Dumbeldore or pity him. Was it really necessary to tell Harry the whole horrible truth and smash his hopes?
Also I'm starting to wonder if Harry's Horcrux might not be gone already. When Voldemort erased Draco's Mark in ch.18, Harry felt a similar pain in his scar and he was holding Draco's wrist at that moment...

This is a great story.

I love Harry Potter. While I very much enjoyed the books and found most of the caracters endearing (even the villans)I must confess the reason I ventured into fanfiction is one scruffy looking, temperamental, miopic child with a penchant for trouble.
There is one moment that defines Harry for me. The "I open at the close" moment. He is NOT a perfect person. Too many things contribute into making him as far from perfect as anybody can be. But while everybody has redeeming qualities, as he steps into the Forbidden Forrest, his I can only call sublime. Many took chances with their lives, spying, fighting, madly searching for horcruxes, but only Harry and Lily Potter offered their lives so others could live knowing there is no escape. Lily did it for her son, in the heat of the moment.
So..what I am trying to say is:
Thank you for capturing in your stories both the imperfection and the sublime of the caracter I love.
Mia

yep. he brought trouble. thank goodness that people are noticing the effects. i have a feeling severus will win next time won't he? ugh the tension keeps oon building and i can't stand it..... thank you so much for the good character development and the unspoken admiision by sev that he's somewhat like James by that comment. i meant a de-aged fic of either harry or dray preferably harry. however, if u're uncomfortable with child fice then nevermind. completely understand. i hated writing plays. still do. thanks again for a good read. oh and have u read any of vorabiza's fics? as always til next time. viven la vida loca!

excellent story! i love the storyline. made my heart clench in pain when severus told harry deserve life when harry couldnt have life anymore becuz of the horcruxes. please continue writing!

Great chapter. Dumbledore is such a prick.

I hope Snape and Draco can save Harry, and soon! It was a really good Ch. I liked Snapes and Harrys argument.

Simply brillant and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Poor Harry, I'm guessing Snape doesn't realize he's the last horacrux? I really hope that after the encounter with Snape that Harry spills to Draco! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Is Harry ever going to give Snape the chance to even try to be his parent. He seems to be hell bent on keeping the man away from him.

Excellent job. The exchange between Harry and Snape was so charged with electricity, I could feel it even as the words formed pictures in mine head. Thank you for this wonderful update, please do so again when you have the chance. Me thinks Draco's tired of being passenger seat of every vehicle in his life.....