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I adore this story. I'm not sure why I favor it above the others, but I do. I love this so very much. Thank you.

~Mia

I look forward to every update you have. I check the site for it. Why? Because I am truely dependant on it. please update soon.

I absolutely love this story.
Part of me wants harry to accept Sev but another part of me wants Severus to suffer more for being a jerk.

Thanks for writing, you have a way with words that is a joy to read.

Cheers,
L

Oh thank God the secrets out. Loved the ch.

about #21...

First of all, loved the chapter title..for a second you had me
thinking of boxing [not dueling]. :-)

Second, you, my dear...sweet...kind...WONDERful...author, are
starting to frustrate me. As I got halfway through the
chapter I was like 'how stubborn can ONE boy be???'

I wanted to take a stick and beat the hard-headed child
upside the head!

Admit it, you're going to stretch this out until your readers
decide to form a lynch mob. :-)

By the way, I hope Severus doesn't verbally 'hurt' Albus TOO bad...

Oh Merlin! Poor Harry! You are a fan of happy endings, right? Right????? This is amazing plot line, but seriously evil, even if it was needed to solve the Voldemort problem. And it's quite the amazing way of putting Snape into action, as the thought of loosing the son he's never gotten the chance to know, just after finding out, is sure to make him ignore his problems with the past and start helping Harry instead. Really though, please don't kill Harry, at least not permanently. Hmm... You stick to some of the important details of the books, so I'll hope he only dies temporarily as in the book. This is brilliant though.
Still, sorry for my English ^^;

Update soon! (Three days feels like three decades when one is waiting for something so brilliant!)


Also, a little question; Where you wrote "As Potter thought he was alone, Potter wondered again what sort of life this boy had led, to make him so...." it's suposed to be "As Potter thought he was alone, Snape wondered again what sort of life this boy had led, to make him so...", right? :)

Looking anxiously forward to the next chapter!

agghhh! u've got me so mixed up. i'm happy that Snape found out and is willing to help harry and yet i'm irritated because harry is so stubborn. it's.. aggh. it's just that beautifully written and tortorously suspenseful and only put together so wonderfully that i can't wait for more. the interactions are so realistic it's like a well written drama that leaves a person hanging. and it'll be three days before we get an update. that used to be a blessing but now it's an agonizing (but so worth the wait) curse. which makes this so much fun. til next time! arigatou gozaimasu!
(side note: i understand how u could see them as creepy but i hope u didn't take it as a liking for shouta cause that really does squick me.)

The horocrux is already gone, isn't it? Harry felt pain in his scar and he was connected with Draco when his mark was melting away. It has to be gone, I can't bare to loose Harry! Not now when he's finally and slowly, albeist very reluctantly, starts to realize Snape isn't the bad guy he thought he was! Or at least he's about to be proven wrong.
I must admit this particular story is currently my all time favourite. You capture the characters in such a believable way and your plot is so well developed! Draco is a bit out of character, but that is to be expected, as we didn't get to know him that well in the books, which leaves space for imagination. Amazing work!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

And it's quite refreshing to read a story by a talented author who put such thought into each and every word. Thank you for writing this.

Protective!Snape is adorable! *has had a bit of a crush on Snape since the first book*

I love this story :D and I'm glad it's you who're writing this; I don't think any other fanfiction writer could do as well as you.

Also, do you do requests? :D I'd really like to read a "Harry turns werewolf with Remus or Fenrir as his mate"-fic written with your words. That would be so amazing!

Soooo need chapter 21!!!